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Let me Try (One Shots)
notnecessarytoknowme- FanFic Writer
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- Post n°26
Re: Let me Try (One Shots)
I'll try to make one to feed in your requests, plus one more fic coming up. Melon+Big dome, not sure when.. kekeke. Hope you enjoy my new fic
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daebak sis notnecessary! love your new ff ahihihi more please :D
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Wow you made it again...I love you fanfic really...thank you for posting this ASAP ...lol we are always waiting your fanfic to be post here...I always check this thread if you already posted a new one...lol...you can say that I'm a addicted to Suk and Hye and for all the writers doing fanfic about them I'm really thankful for them. and me as your follower I'm really thankful for you that you post your fanfic here and share your talents in writing...I will going to wait all you next fanfic... more love and keep safe everyday
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@notnecessarytoknowme...thank you!!!..a very nice fanfic..the bodyguards..so cute!!
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@notnecessarytoknowme...thank you!!!..a very nice fanfic..the bodyguards..so cute!!
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@notnecessarytoknowme
I heard that you're a good writer.......I say....you're better than I expected...
Great work sis!! and I think it's necessary for members to know you and your very nice FanFic......
thanks so much and keep up the good work!! more please....
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I feel like I was in front of the 3 American Idol judges when I'm reading demi_zhu's comment, I was very nervous. And I feel flattered and floating when I read your good feedback. Thank you, and to my other readers too, especially those who comment oftenly. Big thanks!
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Sorry for not posting for a while. My schedule is quite hectic, and next week, we'll have our quarterly exams. OH, and I was shocked when I saw exactly 700 views of my thread. Thank you! Keep safe :)
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Re: Let me Try (One Shots)
THE BIG DOME-WHAT SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED
"Chagi.." followed by a knock on the door
"Come in Oppa"
"Ommo, my girl's really beautiful"
She blushed and smiled at his compliment.
She walked towards him and tangled her arms with his "Ahh..Oppa, I'm very nervous"
He patted her head and kissed it gently
"Don't be, you look perfectly beautiful, plus, I'll be there, stop worrying"
She untangled their arms then hugged him fully
"I saw the crowd a while ago, they're scary"
He hugged her back "Ani, my eels are nice..and friendly"
"Friendly?!" she jerked, "Not really..." she said thinking how some harassed her
He suddenly laughed "HAHAHA, I mean, My true eels are nice... and friendly"
"Much better..."
They were smiling then swayed from side to side while hugging.
Someone yelled from outside the room
"5 minutes 'til show"
He pulled away from the hug then wiggled his finger in the air
"Ahhhh! I hate you" then pushed his chest. She became more nervous, she breathed deeply
He caught her wrists then placed them on his waist, while his arms at his back. Meaning, they hugged again (Kekeke)
"I'll go first, OK? Watch me at the screen" he pulled away from the hug them proceeded at the door but was stopped by Shin Hye's hand
"Wait"
She kissed his cheek
"Goodluck Chagi!"
He pouted sending some subliminal message
She giggled then held his neck, she placed light smacks on his lips then a long steady one, nose to nose and foreheads touching. And yeah, after a minute it turned into an open mouth kiss.
"3 minutes!"
Shin Hye pulled away but Keun Suk insisted some more.
He can feel that she's smiling at the kiss, and yes, he loves that feeling
"2 minutes"
He swear, he felt like he could beat Hercules with that strength he showed when he pulled away from the kiss
"Aish, why now?..."
She giggled, she then pushed him towards the door
"Go now, go now" then opened the door for him.
With her head peeping at the hallway "Don''t worry, we'll have some private time at the hotel!" then winked her eyes, stil giggling
"I'll mark those words Park Shin Hye" then ran towards the backstage.
---
Shinhye: "My Heart is Beating really. I Envy Suk. I Want to Have a Concert like this. If I ever have a concert will you come to see me?"
Keun Suk appeared on stage
Shinhye:Hyungnim!!
Suk: "Go Mi Nam, why do you still call me Hyungnim ? The drama was over. When have you become a woman? You are a perfect girl now. Where is Jeremy?"
Shinhye:"He is now having a concert in Korea."
Suk:"But You, after a long time I saw you, you're still cute as ever."
It wasn't supposed to be love
It was never supposed to be
I fooled myself many times before, but my heart keeps on calling you
Before i tried to run away
I tried to push a step away
But even then you were growing bigger inside me
I must love you this much
I must wait for you this much
No matter how much it hurts, my heart can't leave you
There must be one love
My heart won't change
The love I protected for you, now I can tell you everything
Your warm eye expression
Your warm love
You are growing bigger inside me
You must have loved me
You must have waited for me
No matter how much I made you hurt, your heart can't leave me
There must be one love
My heart won't change
The love I protected for you, now I can tell you everything
I love you
Sometimes love, or tears will cause problems for us
I love you, I love you I just need you next to me
I must still love you
I must be waiting for you
I could fool my mind, but not my heart
There must be one love
My heart won't change
The love I protected for you, now I can tell you everything
I love you
Suk: "It's been ages since you really last listened to it as well, right? "
Suk:"Eels, meet Ms.Park Shin Hye."
Suk:"Were You busy?"
Shinhye:"A little bit."
Suk:"You went to Africa, right? I wanted to go with you. "
Shinhye: "Ani, ani. Eels might get jealous"
Suk:"If we a get a chance, may we go together eels?."
Suk:"You've become a real actress now Go Mi Nam. You are beautiful .
Shinhye: "I was happy. Next time, I will see you at my concert."
Suk:"Thank you for coming. Take Care."
They shook hands, and Shin Hye was about to go but..
"Oh,oh,oh, where do you think you're going?" It's BB!
Eels howled
"Hang on, hang on"
"Yah! What is the meaning of this?" Keun Suk blurted out
"Eels, you want some game?" then pointed the mic to the audience
"YES!!!" was their reply
"Yah! Who told you to manipulate the flow of MY concert" adding emphasis to the word "my"..."I swear you won't earn any from this, you'll pay instead"
"HAHAHA, why are you sweating hyung? Don't worry the game's easy"
"I doubt that Oppa"
"Oh, Shin Hye-ah, believe me it's. So the two of you, let's move nearer to our audience" he pushed the couple in front.
Before he said the instructions, he asked permission from the eels, "Eels, will you let Park Shin Hye touch your prince?"
"YES!!!"
"Oh, seems like you've got your blessings from them!"
"Oh Hyung I'm starting to like your game, I always wanted to be touched by her, ahhhh. I'm so excited"
That made her give him a light punch at his shoulder
"OK, so let's start"
"Oh, wait, wait.. Why you didn't ask my fans if he could touch me" she questioned, that made the whole dome laugh
"That's totally unfair!" she added.
Keun Suk and BB keep on laughing
"Ok, I get it, I know that most eels are a fan of Park Shin Hye right?"
The crowd roared
"So, stars, would you let Jang Geun Suk touch your princess?"
"YES!!!!"
"May we start with the game now?"
The couple kept in giggling, "Yes, yes"
"The rule of the game is to follow what I say, very easy right?"
"Yeah, yeah.. so what's the first thing we gonna do?"
"Eye to eye"
The crowd spazzed
They directed their eye contact towards each other, then giggled
"Ommo, ommo!" BB said. He added "you gotta be careful with your reactions, they might figure out something!"
"Stop it" Keun Suk said without removing his eyes from Shin Hye
"Next forehead to forehead, you gotta do it with your past position still on going"
And so they did
"Boy's hand at girl's waist, girl's hand at boy's neck"
The crowd went wild, but what added fuel to the fire was Keun Suk's action.
Instead of putting his hands just on her waist, he extended his arms towards her back, making her body close to him even more, while Shin Hye, who can do nothing kept on murmuring "Oppa! You're gonna join BB paying for this"
He just giggled "Don't you like this?"
"I do, but not in front of them!"
"Oh, seems like our couple's saying something", "Do you want to say something Hyung?" then pointed the mic to him
"Nothing"
"Next, nose to nose"
The crowd went crazy
They can feel each other's breath now
Keun Suk's naughtiness made him pout, but Shin Hye's reflex was faster then his, so she get to manage pocketing her lips.
The crowd laughed.
"Any more suggestions?"
"Kiss!" some fans said
"Oh! Ani,ani, that's far beyond the limit! kekeke" BB said, he added "Anyways, let's clap our hands for our obedient couple"
*Claps*
"You may break away now", but he was surprised coz they're still at the same position
"Can't we stay like this a little longer?" Keun Suk suggested
"Ani, antis are already protesting outside"
*Laughter*
The two break away, then the two gentlemen sent Shin Hye towards the backstage.
---
They're in the car now, a bit exhausted from the concert, yet smiling
"Oppa, we need to talk about many things" she said with arms folded, pouting
He took a glance of her then laughed "Ommo, I'm scared"
The two laughed
Comfortable silence took over.
"Oppa, I don't think this is the way where the party will be held"
"Shhh"
"Oh, where are you taking me"
He looked at her then smirked
"Oppa, I'll shout kidnapping or even rape"
"Tch! If my fans heard that, they'll gonna pull you off my car, then take your seat instead"
"Wow, how arrogant, and then you're really gonna rape them?"
"That's not rape, it's not forced"
Her eyes went wide "So you're gonna do IT?"
"Of course not, I'm just kidding" and flashed a smile at her "I'll go with you outside instead"
She smiled but managed to keep it "Tch"
"Oh we're here" then steped on the breaks
Shin Hye bend down a little to see where were they
"Oh! An ice cream house!!!!" she felt excited
"Let's go inside now, faster!" then she went off the car immediately
"Aish, look at this girl, she left just like that"
---
"Ahhh. this tastes really good"
He was smiling watching her "My girl's just amazing, she looks beautiful even by just eating some ice cream" he said in his mind
"Oppa, what if someone sees us here?"
"PfftHAHAHA"
"Mwo?"
He's still giggling "Look around you"
She did, that was when she realize that they were alone
"So you plan this beforehand?"
"Yes" looking proudly,"If I know.. you really are flattered, huh?" he added with a teasing smile
"Tch!"
"Stop hidin' it, you're blushing"
"I'm not blushing!"
"Ohhh you're so cute" then pinched her cheeks
"Eat fast chagi, you promised me something right? The hotel thing?" he said with one eyebrow raised
"Aish I take my words back, that's for playing BB's game"
"Unfair! But I can't disagree, the fans liked it"
"Hmp!"
"Chagi.." followed by a knock on the door
"Come in Oppa"
"Ommo, my girl's really beautiful"
She blushed and smiled at his compliment.
She walked towards him and tangled her arms with his "Ahh..Oppa, I'm very nervous"
He patted her head and kissed it gently
"Don't be, you look perfectly beautiful, plus, I'll be there, stop worrying"
She untangled their arms then hugged him fully
"I saw the crowd a while ago, they're scary"
He hugged her back "Ani, my eels are nice..and friendly"
"Friendly?!" she jerked, "Not really..." she said thinking how some harassed her
He suddenly laughed "HAHAHA, I mean, My true eels are nice... and friendly"
"Much better..."
They were smiling then swayed from side to side while hugging.
Someone yelled from outside the room
"5 minutes 'til show"
He pulled away from the hug then wiggled his finger in the air
"Ahhhh! I hate you" then pushed his chest. She became more nervous, she breathed deeply
He caught her wrists then placed them on his waist, while his arms at his back. Meaning, they hugged again (Kekeke)
"I'll go first, OK? Watch me at the screen" he pulled away from the hug them proceeded at the door but was stopped by Shin Hye's hand
"Wait"
She kissed his cheek
"Goodluck Chagi!"
He pouted sending some subliminal message
She giggled then held his neck, she placed light smacks on his lips then a long steady one, nose to nose and foreheads touching. And yeah, after a minute it turned into an open mouth kiss.
"3 minutes!"
Shin Hye pulled away but Keun Suk insisted some more.
He can feel that she's smiling at the kiss, and yes, he loves that feeling
"2 minutes"
He swear, he felt like he could beat Hercules with that strength he showed when he pulled away from the kiss
"Aish, why now?..."
She giggled, she then pushed him towards the door
"Go now, go now" then opened the door for him.
With her head peeping at the hallway "Don''t worry, we'll have some private time at the hotel!" then winked her eyes, stil giggling
"I'll mark those words Park Shin Hye" then ran towards the backstage.
---
Shinhye: "My Heart is Beating really. I Envy Suk. I Want to Have a Concert like this. If I ever have a concert will you come to see me?"
Keun Suk appeared on stage
Shinhye:Hyungnim!!
Suk: "Go Mi Nam, why do you still call me Hyungnim ? The drama was over. When have you become a woman? You are a perfect girl now. Where is Jeremy?"
Shinhye:"He is now having a concert in Korea."
Suk:"But You, after a long time I saw you, you're still cute as ever."
It wasn't supposed to be love
It was never supposed to be
I fooled myself many times before, but my heart keeps on calling you
Before i tried to run away
I tried to push a step away
But even then you were growing bigger inside me
I must love you this much
I must wait for you this much
No matter how much it hurts, my heart can't leave you
There must be one love
My heart won't change
The love I protected for you, now I can tell you everything
Your warm eye expression
Your warm love
You are growing bigger inside me
You must have loved me
You must have waited for me
No matter how much I made you hurt, your heart can't leave me
There must be one love
My heart won't change
The love I protected for you, now I can tell you everything
I love you
Sometimes love, or tears will cause problems for us
I love you, I love you I just need you next to me
I must still love you
I must be waiting for you
I could fool my mind, but not my heart
There must be one love
My heart won't change
The love I protected for you, now I can tell you everything
I love you
Suk: "It's been ages since you really last listened to it as well, right? "
Suk:"Eels, meet Ms.Park Shin Hye."
Suk:"Were You busy?"
Shinhye:"A little bit."
Suk:"You went to Africa, right? I wanted to go with you. "
Shinhye: "Ani, ani. Eels might get jealous"
Suk:"If we a get a chance, may we go together eels?."
Suk:"You've become a real actress now Go Mi Nam. You are beautiful .
Shinhye: "I was happy. Next time, I will see you at my concert."
Suk:"Thank you for coming. Take Care."
They shook hands, and Shin Hye was about to go but..
"Oh,oh,oh, where do you think you're going?" It's BB!
Eels howled
"Hang on, hang on"
"Yah! What is the meaning of this?" Keun Suk blurted out
"Eels, you want some game?" then pointed the mic to the audience
"YES!!!" was their reply
"Yah! Who told you to manipulate the flow of MY concert" adding emphasis to the word "my"..."I swear you won't earn any from this, you'll pay instead"
"HAHAHA, why are you sweating hyung? Don't worry the game's easy"
"I doubt that Oppa"
"Oh, Shin Hye-ah, believe me it's. So the two of you, let's move nearer to our audience" he pushed the couple in front.
Before he said the instructions, he asked permission from the eels, "Eels, will you let Park Shin Hye touch your prince?"
"YES!!!"
"Oh, seems like you've got your blessings from them!"
"Oh Hyung I'm starting to like your game, I always wanted to be touched by her, ahhhh. I'm so excited"
That made her give him a light punch at his shoulder
"OK, so let's start"
"Oh, wait, wait.. Why you didn't ask my fans if he could touch me" she questioned, that made the whole dome laugh
"That's totally unfair!" she added.
Keun Suk and BB keep on laughing
"Ok, I get it, I know that most eels are a fan of Park Shin Hye right?"
The crowd roared
"So, stars, would you let Jang Geun Suk touch your princess?"
"YES!!!!"
"May we start with the game now?"
The couple kept in giggling, "Yes, yes"
"The rule of the game is to follow what I say, very easy right?"
"Yeah, yeah.. so what's the first thing we gonna do?"
"Eye to eye"
The crowd spazzed
They directed their eye contact towards each other, then giggled
"Ommo, ommo!" BB said. He added "you gotta be careful with your reactions, they might figure out something!"
"Stop it" Keun Suk said without removing his eyes from Shin Hye
"Next forehead to forehead, you gotta do it with your past position still on going"
And so they did
"Boy's hand at girl's waist, girl's hand at boy's neck"
The crowd went wild, but what added fuel to the fire was Keun Suk's action.
Instead of putting his hands just on her waist, he extended his arms towards her back, making her body close to him even more, while Shin Hye, who can do nothing kept on murmuring "Oppa! You're gonna join BB paying for this"
He just giggled "Don't you like this?"
"I do, but not in front of them!"
"Oh, seems like our couple's saying something", "Do you want to say something Hyung?" then pointed the mic to him
"Nothing"
"Next, nose to nose"
The crowd went crazy
They can feel each other's breath now
Keun Suk's naughtiness made him pout, but Shin Hye's reflex was faster then his, so she get to manage pocketing her lips.
The crowd laughed.
"Any more suggestions?"
"Kiss!" some fans said
"Oh! Ani,ani, that's far beyond the limit! kekeke" BB said, he added "Anyways, let's clap our hands for our obedient couple"
*Claps*
"You may break away now", but he was surprised coz they're still at the same position
"Can't we stay like this a little longer?" Keun Suk suggested
"Ani, antis are already protesting outside"
*Laughter*
The two break away, then the two gentlemen sent Shin Hye towards the backstage.
---
They're in the car now, a bit exhausted from the concert, yet smiling
"Oppa, we need to talk about many things" she said with arms folded, pouting
He took a glance of her then laughed "Ommo, I'm scared"
The two laughed
Comfortable silence took over.
"Oppa, I don't think this is the way where the party will be held"
"Shhh"
"Oh, where are you taking me"
He looked at her then smirked
"Oppa, I'll shout kidnapping or even rape"
"Tch! If my fans heard that, they'll gonna pull you off my car, then take your seat instead"
"Wow, how arrogant, and then you're really gonna rape them?"
"That's not rape, it's not forced"
Her eyes went wide "So you're gonna do IT?"
"Of course not, I'm just kidding" and flashed a smile at her "I'll go with you outside instead"
She smiled but managed to keep it "Tch"
"Oh we're here" then steped on the breaks
Shin Hye bend down a little to see where were they
"Oh! An ice cream house!!!!" she felt excited
"Let's go inside now, faster!" then she went off the car immediately
"Aish, look at this girl, she left just like that"
---
"Ahhh. this tastes really good"
He was smiling watching her "My girl's just amazing, she looks beautiful even by just eating some ice cream" he said in his mind
"Oppa, what if someone sees us here?"
"PfftHAHAHA"
"Mwo?"
He's still giggling "Look around you"
She did, that was when she realize that they were alone
"So you plan this beforehand?"
"Yes" looking proudly,"If I know.. you really are flattered, huh?" he added with a teasing smile
"Tch!"
"Stop hidin' it, you're blushing"
"I'm not blushing!"
"Ohhh you're so cute" then pinched her cheeks
"Eat fast chagi, you promised me something right? The hotel thing?" he said with one eyebrow raised
"Aish I take my words back, that's for playing BB's game"
"Unfair! But I can't disagree, the fans liked it"
"Hmp!"
notnecessarytoknowme- FanFic Writer
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Re: Let me Try (One Shots)
HELLO! Dunno if you're still reading this. Kekeke. Sorry for not posting for a long time. Anyways, I hope you like the one I posted just some minutes ago, and help me about the the credits please? Don't know where to credit some parts of the script of the Big Dome event... I'm gonna post the continuation of this later!
Kroo Kroo~
Kroo Kroo~
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UNDER THE SHEETS
"Oh the couple's back!" BB said, he and some of the staff are having some coffee at the reception hall
"Hyung!"
He tossed a key "Your room key hyung"
"Thanks"
Then he started walking
"Hey, hey, hey" Shin hye blurted out, "Where is mine?"
The whole hall laughed
"It's with hyung too Shin Hye-ah"
"What does this mean?" she pointed her eyes to Keun Suk
He raised the keys and wiggled them
"We're sleeping at the same room" he smirked
"What?!"
"Come now" then he dragged her
---
She was sitting at the edge of the bed, pouting
"Hey, stop pouting, I'll kiss you" he warned
"Don't you dare touch me"
"HAHAHA, what if I will?"
She stood up, "I'll use the bathroom first"
He smiled inside, "At least she's slowly accepting the truth that we're gonna sleep together" he thought
"Ahhhhhhhhh!"
He heard a hight-pitch-glass-breaking scream, he ran towards the bathroom door and yelled "Shin Hye what is it?"
"Help me"
"Are you sure I can come in?"
"Yes I'm fully dressed pervert"
"Do want me to help you or not?"
"Aish, just go inside"
He opened the door "What's the problem?"
"Uhmm.. There's a cockroach" she said, without looking at his eyes
"Ahhhh..I'm transfering to the other room" obviously teasing her
"Chagiii!" she said with pleading eyes "Please kill it? I'll sleep with you.. Please?"
He marveled at the situation because he won the argument
He killed the cockroach "I think I need to thank you, but I need to kill you too sorry"
She hugged her
"Look at this brave girl, and a while ago you want to sleep alone?"
"I'll stay here, I love you"
"I love you too"
---
She's waiting for him to fall a sleep, that was her plan. She thought that it's better for her to lie down on the bed after he sleeps, but it looks like he's not sleeping at this point of time. He smirked.
Her wandering in the room was cut off by a call
"Hello?Appa!"
"Shin Hye-ah how was it?"
"The concert was fine, I enjoyed a lot, I'll gonna tell you a lot of stories when I get back there" she cheerfully said
"Oh, good. How about your room? He asked permission from me to sleep with you, are you with him?"
"Yes Appa, the room is comfortable"
"What? I didn't allowed him!"
"WHAT?!!!" she moved her phone down a little then faced Keun Suk "You! Appa didn't allowed you? Aish, I thought everything's fine? I'm moving out!"
"Yeah, and make friends with the cockroach"
She was taken a back, frozed on where she stands
Then as if on cue, Keun Suk and the person on the line laughed together
"Ani, Shin Hye-ah, I'm just kidding, I grant him my permission. I want to talk to him"
She handed him the phone with killer eyes
"Hello? Abeonim (I'm not sure with the word, kekeke, I'm too lazy to search. Kekeke) *both of them still laughing* "
"Ahh.. looks like you've discovered one of her bestfriends huh? She really hates them-cockroaches"
"HAHAHA. I was shocked by her scream, Ahh very high pitched" he said giggling
"Hahaha..." *ehem ehem* recovering from his laughing, "Don't do stupid things, okay? You're adults already, you know what's right or wrong, am I right?"
"Yes abeonim, I'll take care of her and I promise to be a good boy"
"Good, may I talk to her again?"
"Oh, yes. Annyeong abeonim"
He gave back her phone
"Be a good girl ok?"
"Appa?! As if I'll do something stupid!"
"Hahaha.. I'm just reminding you. Alright, you go to sleep, goodnight, your Omma's sleeping already"
"Ok, Appa. Goodnight! I love you!"
"I love you too princess! I'll hang up now"
"Alright, bye!"
Keun Suk smirked at her, then tapped the space beside him
"Hmf" but she obeyed
He pulled her closer. Not yet contented, she grabbed her arm then placed it on his waist.
"You hate breaking promises right?"
"Yes, and then?"
"What are you supposed to be doing now?" raises his eyebrow
"Whaaaat?"
He pouted
"Ahhhhh"
He smiled, coz she got it
But she turned the other side, "Goodnight Oppa"
He pulled her wrist, "Hey hey hey, where do you think you're facing?"
She giggled "I'm gonna sleep"
"Not yet, you said, we''ll continue it here"
"What it?"
"IT!" with eyes widened
"Oh Appa said don't do stupid things"
"Aish" and yeah he kissed her
At first she teased her by not kissing back, but later on she did.
He asked for entrance, and again she didn't let him in.
But she did not expect the next thing he did, he flipped her over, causing her to jerk that parted her lips.
He hungrily kissed her, while the girl under kept on smiling and giggling
He transferred to her neck with matching growls and roars
He placed his forehead on top of hers, his nose on top of hers, "The game a while ago was really easy right? They could have ask for this" then pecked her lips "and this" another peck "and this" another peck "and more" then kissed her simultaneously
The two kept on giggling.
Keun Suk, afraid of losing control, diverted his attention on her right ear-blowing it, and tickling her.
"Ah Oppa *laughs* stop*laughs* it*" she said laughing
And yeah maybe they could enjoy each other's company by this.
After wrestling, tickling, flipping, grabbing, gropping, teasing, kissing, smelling, hugging each other, they ran out of breath and ended up on their first position.
So, they're facing each other feeling each other's breathe
His phone beeped
"Keun Suk, I've beaten my husband already for not waking me up a while ago, I have to say something and he didn't let me? Aish, that ahjussi. I just wanted to tell you that Shin Hye can't sleep without drinking milk, ahrasso? Take care of her, thank you!" he smiled after reading it.
He turned to her direction again
"What was that" she asked
"Nothing, sleep now" then kissed her forehead, "I love you"
"I love you too chagi, goodnight"
After some minutes, he realized that what her omma had said was true, she was tossing and turning.
He stood up, wearing his slippers
"What is it?" she asked
"I'll just go down, I'll buy something"
"Oh, ok"
---
He went back with a glass filled with the milk he bought.
Her back was facing the door so she tapped her
She turned around "Oh"
"Drink this, looks like you can't sleep" then fixed her pillows, so she could lean back and sit comfortably
"How did you know?"
He smiled "It's a secret"
"Tch" then she finished her milk
He smiled again at the sight of milk moustache.
He grabbed her neck and then kissed the moustache away
"Ommo, the Won Bin style" (If you remember, the scene from Secret Garden, he kissed her girl's milk remnants)
"Tch. Won Bin" he said, sounding bitter remembering their interview
She smiled "Yes Won Bin, the handsome and every girl's dream man"
"Yeah, I'm sleeping" then he placed his body under the blanket and turn the other side
"Oh oh oh oh, but really, you're far more handsome than him, and don't worry, I don't have to dream because I have someone in front of me now" she smiled at the thought.
He turned back to her "Really?"
"Yes, so stop it. Let's sleep now" then fixed herself under the blanket too
"Alright, goodnight now Chagi, I hope you could sleep now" he said, placing her in his arms, his chin on top of her head
"Yes chagi, good night, I love you"
"I love you more"..."Ahhh, cuddling you really feels good"
She smiled on her chest, a true smile, a wide smile that his heart could even feel...
"Oh the couple's back!" BB said, he and some of the staff are having some coffee at the reception hall
"Hyung!"
He tossed a key "Your room key hyung"
"Thanks"
Then he started walking
"Hey, hey, hey" Shin hye blurted out, "Where is mine?"
The whole hall laughed
"It's with hyung too Shin Hye-ah"
"What does this mean?" she pointed her eyes to Keun Suk
He raised the keys and wiggled them
"We're sleeping at the same room" he smirked
"What?!"
"Come now" then he dragged her
---
She was sitting at the edge of the bed, pouting
"Hey, stop pouting, I'll kiss you" he warned
"Don't you dare touch me"
"HAHAHA, what if I will?"
She stood up, "I'll use the bathroom first"
He smiled inside, "At least she's slowly accepting the truth that we're gonna sleep together" he thought
"Ahhhhhhhhh!"
He heard a hight-pitch-glass-breaking scream, he ran towards the bathroom door and yelled "Shin Hye what is it?"
"Help me"
"Are you sure I can come in?"
"Yes I'm fully dressed pervert"
"Do want me to help you or not?"
"Aish, just go inside"
He opened the door "What's the problem?"
"Uhmm.. There's a cockroach" she said, without looking at his eyes
"Ahhhh..I'm transfering to the other room" obviously teasing her
"Chagiii!" she said with pleading eyes "Please kill it? I'll sleep with you.. Please?"
He marveled at the situation because he won the argument
He killed the cockroach "I think I need to thank you, but I need to kill you too sorry"
She hugged her
"Look at this brave girl, and a while ago you want to sleep alone?"
"I'll stay here, I love you"
"I love you too"
---
She's waiting for him to fall a sleep, that was her plan. She thought that it's better for her to lie down on the bed after he sleeps, but it looks like he's not sleeping at this point of time. He smirked.
Her wandering in the room was cut off by a call
"Hello?Appa!"
"Shin Hye-ah how was it?"
"The concert was fine, I enjoyed a lot, I'll gonna tell you a lot of stories when I get back there" she cheerfully said
"Oh, good. How about your room? He asked permission from me to sleep with you, are you with him?"
"Yes Appa, the room is comfortable"
"What? I didn't allowed him!"
"WHAT?!!!" she moved her phone down a little then faced Keun Suk "You! Appa didn't allowed you? Aish, I thought everything's fine? I'm moving out!"
"Yeah, and make friends with the cockroach"
She was taken a back, frozed on where she stands
Then as if on cue, Keun Suk and the person on the line laughed together
"Ani, Shin Hye-ah, I'm just kidding, I grant him my permission. I want to talk to him"
She handed him the phone with killer eyes
"Hello? Abeonim (I'm not sure with the word, kekeke, I'm too lazy to search. Kekeke) *both of them still laughing* "
"Ahh.. looks like you've discovered one of her bestfriends huh? She really hates them-cockroaches"
"HAHAHA. I was shocked by her scream, Ahh very high pitched" he said giggling
"Hahaha..." *ehem ehem* recovering from his laughing, "Don't do stupid things, okay? You're adults already, you know what's right or wrong, am I right?"
"Yes abeonim, I'll take care of her and I promise to be a good boy"
"Good, may I talk to her again?"
"Oh, yes. Annyeong abeonim"
He gave back her phone
"Be a good girl ok?"
"Appa?! As if I'll do something stupid!"
"Hahaha.. I'm just reminding you. Alright, you go to sleep, goodnight, your Omma's sleeping already"
"Ok, Appa. Goodnight! I love you!"
"I love you too princess! I'll hang up now"
"Alright, bye!"
Keun Suk smirked at her, then tapped the space beside him
"Hmf" but she obeyed
He pulled her closer. Not yet contented, she grabbed her arm then placed it on his waist.
"You hate breaking promises right?"
"Yes, and then?"
"What are you supposed to be doing now?" raises his eyebrow
"Whaaaat?"
He pouted
"Ahhhhh"
He smiled, coz she got it
But she turned the other side, "Goodnight Oppa"
He pulled her wrist, "Hey hey hey, where do you think you're facing?"
She giggled "I'm gonna sleep"
"Not yet, you said, we''ll continue it here"
"What it?"
"IT!" with eyes widened
"Oh Appa said don't do stupid things"
"Aish" and yeah he kissed her
At first she teased her by not kissing back, but later on she did.
He asked for entrance, and again she didn't let him in.
But she did not expect the next thing he did, he flipped her over, causing her to jerk that parted her lips.
He hungrily kissed her, while the girl under kept on smiling and giggling
He transferred to her neck with matching growls and roars
He placed his forehead on top of hers, his nose on top of hers, "The game a while ago was really easy right? They could have ask for this" then pecked her lips "and this" another peck "and this" another peck "and more" then kissed her simultaneously
The two kept on giggling.
Keun Suk, afraid of losing control, diverted his attention on her right ear-blowing it, and tickling her.
"Ah Oppa *laughs* stop*laughs* it*" she said laughing
And yeah maybe they could enjoy each other's company by this.
After wrestling, tickling, flipping, grabbing, gropping, teasing, kissing, smelling, hugging each other, they ran out of breath and ended up on their first position.
So, they're facing each other feeling each other's breathe
His phone beeped
"Keun Suk, I've beaten my husband already for not waking me up a while ago, I have to say something and he didn't let me? Aish, that ahjussi. I just wanted to tell you that Shin Hye can't sleep without drinking milk, ahrasso? Take care of her, thank you!" he smiled after reading it.
He turned to her direction again
"What was that" she asked
"Nothing, sleep now" then kissed her forehead, "I love you"
"I love you too chagi, goodnight"
After some minutes, he realized that what her omma had said was true, she was tossing and turning.
He stood up, wearing his slippers
"What is it?" she asked
"I'll just go down, I'll buy something"
"Oh, ok"
---
He went back with a glass filled with the milk he bought.
Her back was facing the door so she tapped her
She turned around "Oh"
"Drink this, looks like you can't sleep" then fixed her pillows, so she could lean back and sit comfortably
"How did you know?"
He smiled "It's a secret"
"Tch" then she finished her milk
He smiled again at the sight of milk moustache.
He grabbed her neck and then kissed the moustache away
"Ommo, the Won Bin style" (If you remember, the scene from Secret Garden, he kissed her girl's milk remnants)
"Tch. Won Bin" he said, sounding bitter remembering their interview
She smiled "Yes Won Bin, the handsome and every girl's dream man"
"Yeah, I'm sleeping" then he placed his body under the blanket and turn the other side
"Oh oh oh oh, but really, you're far more handsome than him, and don't worry, I don't have to dream because I have someone in front of me now" she smiled at the thought.
He turned back to her "Really?"
"Yes, so stop it. Let's sleep now" then fixed herself under the blanket too
"Alright, goodnight now Chagi, I hope you could sleep now" he said, placing her in his arms, his chin on top of her head
"Yes chagi, good night, I love you"
"I love you more"..."Ahhh, cuddling you really feels good"
She smiled on her chest, a true smile, a wide smile that his heart could even feel...
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waaaaaaaahhh! yey! another ff from notness! yeba! i love it as usual! daebak ahihiihi
more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.......... Komawo sis for the updates i hope you can post your ff more often ahahaha LOL.. :D Godbless
more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.......... Komawo sis for the updates i hope you can post your ff more often ahahaha LOL.. :D Godbless
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weeee... i love it... more please... hehehe...
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Thanks for the love! I'm gonna post something today "The Proposal"...and yeah, I misspelled a word up there ^
it's mustache, not moustache :)) (how dumb)
I'm gonna eat first, you eat too!
it's mustache, not moustache :)) (how dumb)
I'm gonna eat first, you eat too!
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me too...I LIKE !!
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The people of Korea were confused. They've scanned through all the channels yet they are seeing the same face. Even major radio stations feature his voice. There's even a livestream available in the Internet. LCD billboards showed him up making the busy city stop for a while and witness maybe an important thing? They're sure that this is something very special for him to do things like those.
"Hello Korea, sorry for interrupting your favorite shows, I promise not to take up too much time" he said, with a very fresh looking face, smiling brightly "Coz it's too expensive, kekeke" he jokingly added
He's sitting infront of the camera with an acoustic guitar and a rose on his chest pocket.
"I came here because I realized that there will always be that one special girl for you. Maybe you feel that you're very much inlove with your girlfriends before, but time will come where you would definitely feel and know what true love is. You'll end up realizing that those heartbreaks before are worth the love you have now. Ahhhh.. if you could only try being on my place, it feels very different, I'm very happy having her. And I think now is the right time to do this " yes, he said those words straight from the heart, smiling coz he said those words confidently infrontof the public. While the city, the city's quiet, very attentive on every word he says..
He started strumming his guitar ,
Sir, I'm a bit nervous
About being here today
Still not real sure what I'm going to say
So bare with me please
If I take up too much of your time.
See in this box is a ring for your oldest.
She's my everything and all that I know is
It would be such a relief if I knew that we were on the same side
Cause very soon I'm hoping that I...
Can marry your daughter
And make her my wife
I want her to be the only girl that I love for the rest of my life
And give her the best of me 'til the day that I die, yeah
I'm gonna marry your princess
And make her my queen
She'll be the most beautiful bride that I've ever seen
I can't wait to smile
When she walks down the aisle
On the arm of her father
On the day that I marry your daughter
She's been here every step
Since the day that we met
(I'm scared to death to think of what would happen if she ever left)
So don't you ever worry about me ever treating her bad
I've got most of my vows done so far
(So bring on the better or worse)
And 'til death do us part
There's no doubt in my mind
It's time
I'm ready to start
I swear to you with all of my heart...
I'm gonna marry your daughter
And make her my wife
I want her to be the only girl that I love for the rest of my life
And give her the best of me 'til the day that I die, yeah
I'm gonna marry your princess
And make her my queen
She'll be the most beautiful bride that I've ever seen
I can't wait to smile
As she walks down the aisle
On the arm of her father
On the day that I marry your daughter
The first time I saw her
I swear I knew that I'd say I do
I'm gonna marry your daughter
And make her my wife
I want her to be the only girl that I love for the rest of my life
And give her the best of me 'till the day that I die
I'm gonna marry your princess
And make her my queen
She'll be the most beautiful bride that I've ever seen
I can't wait to smile
As she walks down the aisle
On the arm of her father
On the day that I marry your daughter
Everyone in Korea clapped their hands, and some were in tears, admiring how this brave man showed his love for his girl, how he respect the parents of the girl, and how sweet he was
He held his phone contacting her father, his hands were shaking. He can't press the buttons properly, he keeps on exhaling and inhaling , and sweating inspite of the cold temperature
In loud speaker,
"Uhmm... Hello, jangin eoreun? How's Hawaii?"
He and she gave her parents a gift for their anniversary-a trip to Hawaii!!
"Ahh, It's really nice here, we were shocked when we saw the wirings in our room, now I know what are these for, a live coverage huh? "
He scratched his head, feeling more nervous "Keke, uhh.. Will you grant me permission to marry her?" his sweat could fill up Han, his blood pressure rising
"Ahhh.. You send us here so we won't able to run towards that studio and shout a big no?! Tch!"
His wife cut him off and held the phone instead "Ani, don't mind this ahjussi here... And I guess we have to say yes. You've proven us much, from the start I felt that you'll be the one for her. She's our only daughter, so promise us you'll take care of her and be there if she cries.. So, if ever she will accept your proposal, we'll be happy too "
Someone shout from behind "Aish! As if she will say yes to him "
His wife hit him"Aish, stop"
"Ani, I'm kidding" he grabbed the phone "Alright, alright. We grant you our blessings, but make her happy OK? And don't let the cockroaches go near her ahrasso?" then laughs
"Ahrasso , thank you. I'm really thankful jangin eoreun, jangmonim"
"Abeoji and eomeoni sounds better"
"Oh, really? Thanks Abeoji, Eomeoni!"
"See, sounds good"
"Yup, bye. I've got to ask her now! Thanks again Abeoji, Eomeoni. Enjoy your stay there!"
"Alright, alright. Thank you too for this. Bye" *hang up*
"Ommo, I've passed level 1, let's see if I could do this properly" he said nearing his face to the camera as if talking to the people on the other line.
He started strumming his guitar again
"This one's for you" then smiled
Forever can never be long enough for me
Feel like I've had long enough with you
Forget the world now we won't let them see
But there's one thing left to do
Now that the weight has lifted
Love has surely shifted my way
Marry Me
Today and every day
Marry Me
If I ever get the nerve to say
Hello in this cafe
Say you will
Mm-hmm
Say you will
Mm-hmm
Together can never be close enough for me
Feel like I am close enough to you
You wear white and I'll wear out the words I love
And you're beautiful
Now that the wait is over
And love and has finally shown her my way
Marry me
Today and every day
Marry me
If I ever get the nerve to say hello in this cafe
Say you will
Mm-hmm
Say you will
Mm-hmm
Promise me
You'll always be
Happy by my side
I promise to
Sing to you
When all the music dies
And marry me
Today and everyday
Marry me
If I ever get the nerve to say hello in this cafe
Say you will
Mm-hmm
Say you will
Marry me
Mm-hmm
He held his phone again and dialled her number
"Hello?"
"Hello, Oppa!"
"Where are you?"
"I'm home, watching you"
"How did you manage to go there, when you are always here inside my heart? "
"Ommo, that was just too mushy Oppa, ahhhh try harder "
"Oh well, whatever"
"Aren't you going to ask me anything?"
"Ask anything? Tch, I won't cause by the moment you answered this phone call, we are already engage. Why, are you thinking of saying No? No way miss."
She was yelling something but he put his phone a little lower , then whispered to the camera
"Heard that Korea? We're engaged!!! Ahhhh.. I'm so happy" then he squealed and raised his shoulders.
She, pouting on the other line "I'm going there"
"Faster, I have 20 minutes left"
"I'm inside the taxi now"
He, the staff, and the whole city laughed
"Ok so while waiting for her, I think I'll just sing some songs for you? Bear with me please? Besides, you'll see the same face no matter what channel you're watching right now. Kekeke"
---
"Oppa!"
"Oh, she's here"
He turned to look at her then burst into laughter
"HAHAHAHA" he grabbed the camera then pointed it to her
"Ommo, look at my fiancée, she's only wearing her clothes that she only wear at home, with no make up but she's still beautiful right? You really crammed huh " he said proudly
"What? Ahh, now I'm shy " then tried to hide from the camera
He gave the camera back to the camera man, then went back to his seat
"Yah, come here" then tapped the seat beside him
She obeyed him
"Aish, this is so unfair. Didn't got the chance to refuse" she pouted "The whole Korea can see me?"
"Yes" he smiled
"He's just so lame right? Proposing like that?"
"Hey, hey, hey. Stop it, I know deep inside, you're squealing"
"Tch, by the way, are you sure about this? Proposing in public?"
"I've done it already" shrugs
"Coz, a while ago, people are throwing stones at the taxi I'm riding"
"What?!"
"PftHAHAHAHAHA. Kidding" she can't help but laugh
"Ommo, my fiancée's crazy, wrong decision... Kekeke... By the way Stars, don't worry, I'll take care of her, promise" he smiled .. And eels, don't worry, I won't let her touch me"
Both of them laughs
The PD shouted behind the camera "Show us some proof, this might just be a movie promotion!"
Both of them laughs again, "How? "
The two of them were looking at the side of the staff,
The staff in unison "Kiss!!!! "
She was still looking at them, but he, he diverted his eyes to her face.
As soon ashe turned her head, he kissed her- a light and gentle and sounding smack
She hit her chest , the staff giggling, Korea spazzing, bitter people turning off the TV (keke)
She hid from the camera
"Well, I think that's all? Ahh.. I've got to pay a lot for this.. Keke, kidding, if it is for this girl, it's totally fine." He waved his hands "Byeeee... Thank you for giving some time for us, you can watch your favorite show now! Annyeong!"
The staff congratulated them, the couple could feel that they are really happy for them
He tapped her shoulder for her to look at him
"Uhmm...What you see a while ago, was me building up my confidence. I said those words looking confident and joking, but really, inside I was shaking. You are complaining a while ago that I didn't ask you that question. So here I am, infront of you trying my best not to stutter nor shake."
He knelt down and grabbed the box of ring in his pocket
"Park Shin Hye, saying Will you marry is too classical, and I can't think of any figurative language to say, but I just want you to know that I love you, I really do.. So, will you be my Mi Nyu?"
Her heart was filled with bliss, him kneeling down infront of her "Yes chagi. Yes Tae Kyung. Yes Jang Geun Suk. I love you too "
He placed the ring to where it should be, he kissed it then stood up.
They embraced each other, she crying, both of them feeling the luckiest of their kind, and yes, they're in the arms of their love.
The studio applaused and some were even crying, some wished for the same fate.
What they didn't know was that Korea is still seeing them, the coverage didn't actuallys stop, the camera man pointed it to them so that the public are witnessing the actual proposal, raw.
Until Shin Hye notices it "Ommo" then points at the camera
Keun Suk turned around then saw it too
Everyone laughed
He came closer to the camera, then whispered "Ah, you tricked us, now, Korea, be quiet, ahrasso? Antis are now banging the door!!" That made everyone laugh more "Keke, ani. I hope you would accept us, and be happy for us, that's all. Thank you!".."That part you extended, am I going to pay for that too? Kekeke"
"Ani! You won't, your father paid for that" shouted the PD
"Oh really? Thanks Appa!!!!"
He removed his coat to cover the both of them.
Covering their first kiss after being engage , and yeah.. it feels different.
It's just so different...
THE PROPOSAL ~;{@
I placed the title at the end so you won't get a clue from the start, but yeah.. I messed up my own plan coz I've posted the title a while ago.. just in case you forgot. Kekeke
I also had some hangul lessons, kekeke. for the use of abeoji and the like. I should not use Eomeonim nor Abeonim when I'm talking about Shin Hye's parents, coz that's the girl's side. mianhe :)) Learn more on the link below
And also I just want to say this, fiancée is for the girl while fiancé is for the boy.. Nothing, just wanna share some piece of information.. Kekeke
And lastly, if you notice I'm using different writing styles, it's because I'm experimenting to which do I write better.. but actually, I just write whatever I want to depending on my mood...
Enjoy!
Credits:
http://www.lyricsmode.com/lyrics/b/brian_mcknight/marry_your_daughter.html
http://www.lyricstime.com/train-marry-me-lyrics.htm
http://www.lifeinkorea.com/language/korean.cfm?Subject=family
"Hello Korea, sorry for interrupting your favorite shows, I promise not to take up too much time" he said, with a very fresh looking face, smiling brightly "Coz it's too expensive, kekeke" he jokingly added
He's sitting infront of the camera with an acoustic guitar and a rose on his chest pocket.
"I came here because I realized that there will always be that one special girl for you. Maybe you feel that you're very much inlove with your girlfriends before, but time will come where you would definitely feel and know what true love is. You'll end up realizing that those heartbreaks before are worth the love you have now. Ahhhh.. if you could only try being on my place, it feels very different, I'm very happy having her. And I think now is the right time to do this " yes, he said those words straight from the heart, smiling coz he said those words confidently infrontof the public. While the city, the city's quiet, very attentive on every word he says..
He started strumming his guitar ,
Sir, I'm a bit nervous
About being here today
Still not real sure what I'm going to say
So bare with me please
If I take up too much of your time.
See in this box is a ring for your oldest.
She's my everything and all that I know is
It would be such a relief if I knew that we were on the same side
Cause very soon I'm hoping that I...
Can marry your daughter
And make her my wife
I want her to be the only girl that I love for the rest of my life
And give her the best of me 'til the day that I die, yeah
I'm gonna marry your princess
And make her my queen
She'll be the most beautiful bride that I've ever seen
I can't wait to smile
When she walks down the aisle
On the arm of her father
On the day that I marry your daughter
She's been here every step
Since the day that we met
(I'm scared to death to think of what would happen if she ever left)
So don't you ever worry about me ever treating her bad
I've got most of my vows done so far
(So bring on the better or worse)
And 'til death do us part
There's no doubt in my mind
It's time
I'm ready to start
I swear to you with all of my heart...
I'm gonna marry your daughter
And make her my wife
I want her to be the only girl that I love for the rest of my life
And give her the best of me 'til the day that I die, yeah
I'm gonna marry your princess
And make her my queen
She'll be the most beautiful bride that I've ever seen
I can't wait to smile
As she walks down the aisle
On the arm of her father
On the day that I marry your daughter
The first time I saw her
I swear I knew that I'd say I do
I'm gonna marry your daughter
And make her my wife
I want her to be the only girl that I love for the rest of my life
And give her the best of me 'till the day that I die
I'm gonna marry your princess
And make her my queen
She'll be the most beautiful bride that I've ever seen
I can't wait to smile
As she walks down the aisle
On the arm of her father
On the day that I marry your daughter
Everyone in Korea clapped their hands, and some were in tears, admiring how this brave man showed his love for his girl, how he respect the parents of the girl, and how sweet he was
He held his phone contacting her father, his hands were shaking. He can't press the buttons properly, he keeps on exhaling and inhaling , and sweating inspite of the cold temperature
In loud speaker,
"Uhmm... Hello, jangin eoreun? How's Hawaii?"
He and she gave her parents a gift for their anniversary-a trip to Hawaii!!
"Ahh, It's really nice here, we were shocked when we saw the wirings in our room, now I know what are these for, a live coverage huh? "
He scratched his head, feeling more nervous "Keke, uhh.. Will you grant me permission to marry her?" his sweat could fill up Han, his blood pressure rising
"Ahhh.. You send us here so we won't able to run towards that studio and shout a big no?! Tch!"
His wife cut him off and held the phone instead "Ani, don't mind this ahjussi here... And I guess we have to say yes. You've proven us much, from the start I felt that you'll be the one for her. She's our only daughter, so promise us you'll take care of her and be there if she cries.. So, if ever she will accept your proposal, we'll be happy too "
Someone shout from behind "Aish! As if she will say yes to him "
His wife hit him"Aish, stop"
"Ani, I'm kidding" he grabbed the phone "Alright, alright. We grant you our blessings, but make her happy OK? And don't let the cockroaches go near her ahrasso?" then laughs
"Ahrasso , thank you. I'm really thankful jangin eoreun, jangmonim"
"Abeoji and eomeoni sounds better"
"Oh, really? Thanks Abeoji, Eomeoni!"
"See, sounds good"
"Yup, bye. I've got to ask her now! Thanks again Abeoji, Eomeoni. Enjoy your stay there!"
"Alright, alright. Thank you too for this. Bye" *hang up*
"Ommo, I've passed level 1, let's see if I could do this properly" he said nearing his face to the camera as if talking to the people on the other line.
He started strumming his guitar again
"This one's for you" then smiled
Forever can never be long enough for me
Feel like I've had long enough with you
Forget the world now we won't let them see
But there's one thing left to do
Now that the weight has lifted
Love has surely shifted my way
Marry Me
Today and every day
Marry Me
If I ever get the nerve to say
Hello in this cafe
Say you will
Mm-hmm
Say you will
Mm-hmm
Together can never be close enough for me
Feel like I am close enough to you
You wear white and I'll wear out the words I love
And you're beautiful
Now that the wait is over
And love and has finally shown her my way
Marry me
Today and every day
Marry me
If I ever get the nerve to say hello in this cafe
Say you will
Mm-hmm
Say you will
Mm-hmm
Promise me
You'll always be
Happy by my side
I promise to
Sing to you
When all the music dies
And marry me
Today and everyday
Marry me
If I ever get the nerve to say hello in this cafe
Say you will
Mm-hmm
Say you will
Marry me
Mm-hmm
He held his phone again and dialled her number
"Hello?"
"Hello, Oppa!"
"Where are you?"
"I'm home, watching you"
"How did you manage to go there, when you are always here inside my heart? "
"Ommo, that was just too mushy Oppa, ahhhh try harder "
"Oh well, whatever"
"Aren't you going to ask me anything?"
"Ask anything? Tch, I won't cause by the moment you answered this phone call, we are already engage. Why, are you thinking of saying No? No way miss."
She was yelling something but he put his phone a little lower , then whispered to the camera
"Heard that Korea? We're engaged!!! Ahhhh.. I'm so happy" then he squealed and raised his shoulders.
She, pouting on the other line "I'm going there"
"Faster, I have 20 minutes left"
"I'm inside the taxi now"
He, the staff, and the whole city laughed
"Ok so while waiting for her, I think I'll just sing some songs for you? Bear with me please? Besides, you'll see the same face no matter what channel you're watching right now. Kekeke"
---
"Oppa!"
"Oh, she's here"
He turned to look at her then burst into laughter
"HAHAHAHA" he grabbed the camera then pointed it to her
"Ommo, look at my fiancée, she's only wearing her clothes that she only wear at home, with no make up but she's still beautiful right? You really crammed huh " he said proudly
"What? Ahh, now I'm shy " then tried to hide from the camera
He gave the camera back to the camera man, then went back to his seat
"Yah, come here" then tapped the seat beside him
She obeyed him
"Aish, this is so unfair. Didn't got the chance to refuse" she pouted "The whole Korea can see me?"
"Yes" he smiled
"He's just so lame right? Proposing like that?"
"Hey, hey, hey. Stop it, I know deep inside, you're squealing"
"Tch, by the way, are you sure about this? Proposing in public?"
"I've done it already" shrugs
"Coz, a while ago, people are throwing stones at the taxi I'm riding"
"What?!"
"PftHAHAHAHAHA. Kidding" she can't help but laugh
"Ommo, my fiancée's crazy, wrong decision... Kekeke... By the way Stars, don't worry, I'll take care of her, promise" he smiled .. And eels, don't worry, I won't let her touch me"
Both of them laughs
The PD shouted behind the camera "Show us some proof, this might just be a movie promotion!"
Both of them laughs again, "How? "
The two of them were looking at the side of the staff,
The staff in unison "Kiss!!!! "
She was still looking at them, but he, he diverted his eyes to her face.
As soon ashe turned her head, he kissed her- a light and gentle and sounding smack
She hit her chest , the staff giggling, Korea spazzing, bitter people turning off the TV (keke)
She hid from the camera
"Well, I think that's all? Ahh.. I've got to pay a lot for this.. Keke, kidding, if it is for this girl, it's totally fine." He waved his hands "Byeeee... Thank you for giving some time for us, you can watch your favorite show now! Annyeong!"
The staff congratulated them, the couple could feel that they are really happy for them
He tapped her shoulder for her to look at him
"Uhmm...What you see a while ago, was me building up my confidence. I said those words looking confident and joking, but really, inside I was shaking. You are complaining a while ago that I didn't ask you that question. So here I am, infront of you trying my best not to stutter nor shake."
He knelt down and grabbed the box of ring in his pocket
"Park Shin Hye, saying Will you marry is too classical, and I can't think of any figurative language to say, but I just want you to know that I love you, I really do.. So, will you be my Mi Nyu?"
Her heart was filled with bliss, him kneeling down infront of her "Yes chagi. Yes Tae Kyung. Yes Jang Geun Suk. I love you too "
He placed the ring to where it should be, he kissed it then stood up.
They embraced each other, she crying, both of them feeling the luckiest of their kind, and yes, they're in the arms of their love.
The studio applaused and some were even crying, some wished for the same fate.
What they didn't know was that Korea is still seeing them, the coverage didn't actuallys stop, the camera man pointed it to them so that the public are witnessing the actual proposal, raw.
Until Shin Hye notices it "Ommo" then points at the camera
Keun Suk turned around then saw it too
Everyone laughed
He came closer to the camera, then whispered "Ah, you tricked us, now, Korea, be quiet, ahrasso? Antis are now banging the door!!" That made everyone laugh more "Keke, ani. I hope you would accept us, and be happy for us, that's all. Thank you!".."That part you extended, am I going to pay for that too? Kekeke"
"Ani! You won't, your father paid for that" shouted the PD
"Oh really? Thanks Appa!!!!"
He removed his coat to cover the both of them.
Covering their first kiss after being engage , and yeah.. it feels different.
It's just so different...
THE PROPOSAL ~;{@
I placed the title at the end so you won't get a clue from the start, but yeah.. I messed up my own plan coz I've posted the title a while ago.. just in case you forgot. Kekeke
I also had some hangul lessons, kekeke. for the use of abeoji and the like. I should not use Eomeonim nor Abeonim when I'm talking about Shin Hye's parents, coz that's the girl's side. mianhe :)) Learn more on the link below
And also I just want to say this, fiancée is for the girl while fiancé is for the boy.. Nothing, just wanna share some piece of information.. Kekeke
And lastly, if you notice I'm using different writing styles, it's because I'm experimenting to which do I write better.. but actually, I just write whatever I want to depending on my mood...
Enjoy!
Credits:
http://www.lyricsmode.com/lyrics/b/brian_mcknight/marry_your_daughter.html
http://www.lyricstime.com/train-marry-me-lyrics.htm
http://www.lifeinkorea.com/language/korean.cfm?Subject=family
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weeeeeeehhhh! kiligggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!! ahahha LOL!
can't wait for your next fanfic notness :D Komawo! Komawo! Komawo!
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ME TOO ....i love love love it...MORE MORE MORE fanfic please ...do posting again other fanfic of them....thank you
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Thanks for a thousand views!!!!!!!!! I was shocked!! Special thanks to those who comment here, @mssweet821,@khulynne29,@demi_zhu,@nora, @jfp2268, @lycille, @barbiechan83, @megz ... and those who are sending private messages to me.. you're a big help!
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@notnesssssssssssss
im SO inlove with your FANFIC sis.......
im craving for more more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you are really a GREAT writer.....
thanks for sharing us ur FF here at the FANBOX......
im SO inlove with your FANFIC sis.......
im craving for more more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you are really a GREAT writer.....
thanks for sharing us ur FF here at the FANBOX......
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@notness.. when will you post your new ff? ahahahah mianhe i'm just excited for your update.
Hwaiting :D
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IT's Christmas.. should I be generous? HAHA. Maybe later or tomorrow?
Kekeke. I'm thinking of a scene, I have one in my mind.KEKE
Kekeke. I'm thinking of a scene, I have one in my mind.KEKE
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I'm truly sorry if I wasn't able to post any today.. My head hurts.. sucks.
Please, please.. Mianhe and notnecessarytoknowme wishing you a Happy Christmas! God Bless
-Keep believing :)
Please, please.. Mianhe and notnecessarytoknowme wishing you a Happy Christmas! God Bless
-Keep believing :)
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-OF CIGARETTES AND ALCOHOL -
"Yobo, would you try to quit smoking and minimize your drinking?"
They were at the terrace, he's behind her locking himself to her.
He did not said anything, instead sighs
With that sigh, she turns around to face her "Please? Change.... slowly?" she compromised
"I'll try"
She's tired of those "I'll try" replies, from there she knew that he won't. Maybe it's time, time to be strict for his steps in changing
---
She moved in the house like a ninja, shaking, flipping, throwing, peeking at every possible place of packs of cigarette. She gathered them, then burned each pack outside.
Keun Suk enters their house and sees her "What the?!" she pulled her by the arms
"What do you think you're doing? Burning these cigarettes and messing with my things?"
"Maybe we should do it this way, coz you're not listening"
"Why do you keep on interfering with these kind of things-smoking and drinking?"
She pulled herself away from him then went inside silently
---
"Don't wait for me, I'm with Hongki and company" was what he texts her
next day
"I'm drinking with my friends tonight, sleep early" was what he texts her
next day
"I'm drinking with my friends tonight, sleep early" was what he texts her
next day
"I'm drinking with my friends tonight, sleep early" was what he texts her
next day
"I'm drinking with my friends tonight, sleep early" was what he texts her
"Aish! Is this what you call minimizing?" she went downstairs calling out two bodyguards "Come with me, pali"
---
They arrived at the bar
She saw him drinking with BB and Jason
"Ommo, Suk, bye! You didn't tell us that you have a curfew" BB said
"What?!" he turn around and saw her with 2 body guards
"Get him" she diverted her attention to the two smiling men "Aish, he wants it this way"
"HAHA, good luck Shin Hye-ah! Take care" Jason replied
While Keun Suk, on the other side tries to break free from the big boys "Yah, I'm ordering you to release me"
"Don't mind him, just bring him to the car" she said with conviction
"Tch" he said looking so pissed
---
As soon as he woke up, he ran hurriedly towards the wash room.. then vomits.
Shin Hye, looking worried, ran towards him then rubs his back, surprisingly, Keun Suk throws her hand away
"What were you thinking when you fetched me from the bar? What do you think are they going to say about that? That you're in charge of everything? That I'm under you?" then wipes his mouth
"You're already vomitting from too much drinking yet you wanted to stay there.." she said with her eyes looking very soft then walked away
"What should I do?" she mumbles then smirks-a lightbulb sruck her head
---
The next day he woke up with a breakfast beside him, and Shin Hye not beside him. He gets the table then places in on his lap, he finds a note
Yobo,
Enjoy this breakfast. Sorry, didn't had the chance to eat with you, I'm in a hurry. I love you!
-Shin Hye
Of course, he can't help but smile, but his expression cha nge when he saw a pack of cigarette beside his coffee.
"What is she thinking" he mumbles
"Whatever, I'll just enjoy this"
He tastes the omelet
"Ahh. I'm dying with a happy tongue.."
Since it's a day off for him, he decided to sleep all day inside their room, yes "their" room, ahhh.. so nice to say.
His sleeping was interfered by a knock on the door
"What is it?" he uttered lazily
"Sir, a package was sent for you"
"Aish" he stands up then pulls a hirt randomly then wore them.
He went downstairs then signs the form
"Bring that to my room" he orders
As soon as the box was with him in his room, he opened them.. and yes, was shocked when he saw what's inside
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.
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"Box full of packs of cigarettes?" he said with a very confused expression
His phone rung
"Hello?"
"Hello, yobo, did you like it?"
"Hey, what are you thinking?"
"Why? Don't you like it? Call me if you need more" then hangs up
"Aish, this girl! She really is..Aish!" but of course, he can't help but try them *smirks*
---
Everyday, she would do something related to cigarettes, should would either put them with his breakfast, Khan, a package, his dinner his lunch, his pencil holder, and bath tub -reverse psychology. Still, he had no response. Nothing has really changed.. Even his drinking, in fact he drinks a lot more..
Of course, everyone would get tired when he/she gives effort yet receiving nothing, when you're trying to figure out something, yet nothing has changed..
From there she stopped.. She's quite depressed, fine depressed. She's his wife, yet he can't change him, he can't do anything for him to be a better man..
He's quite confused by her actions, she's cold towards him, and the cigarettes had stopped. (Though he still have stocks.. Kekeke)
He still drinks. He still smokes.
---
It's 1 in the morning and she's still busy reviewing her script in her workplace. Her manager told her to do it at home but she insisted to do it there because, she would surely sleep as soon as she sees the bed. She's dead tired, but she needs to finish it... and sleeping at home is not the solution. Oh, I forgot to tell you that she's the only one left in the building, well except for the guards. 1:30 she started packing up and left the building. While she's going downstairs, she felt that everything's moving, maybe because of lack of sleep. She didn't mind it then proceeded to the parking lot, she felt her head ache again, she gave her head a little massage but that didn't helped. She texted Keun Suk if he can fetch her, since his manager left and he let his driver go home-he said that there's an emergency. 2 minutes and there is no reply.
Meanwhile..
Keun Suk's having fun with his friends. And as soon as he saw a message coming from her, he didn't tried to open it, instead turned his cellphone off.
And then drinks again! Yeah!
She tries to call her, he answered. Yes, the recorded voice answered. "Aish! Seems like I have no choice but to drive myself"
She started driving her head aches again, then.... *crash*
---
He wakes up, and as if it was already part of his routine, he rushes to the toilet bowl.. then vomits. He's quite curious why no one followed him and patted his back. He grabbed some tissue paper to wipe his mouth then went outside. He didn't saw any sign of Shin Hye in their room, so he went out and called for her.
"Shin Hye!" he yelled, "Shin Hye.." -no answer.. "Shin Hye!" he said while going downstairs.
There, he met their helper. "Ahjumma, have you seen Shin Hye?"
He was confused by her expression, she's shock and wondering "Uh, mwo? What's the matter?"
"You didn't know sir? She's at the hospital since last night. She met a car accident"
It's like his mind buffed for a second. "W-what?!"
He ran towards their room and saw his phone turned off, he quickly turns it on and messages flooded it
"Yobo, can you please fetch me? I'm quite dizzy"
"Yobo.. where are you?"
"Yobo..please? I"m serious, I'm not playing tricks on you"
"Your phone is off.. Where are you?"
"Keun Suk-ah please? Please?"
T'was like cold water was spilled to him. His heart is beating faster. He puts his hand on his forehead.. He quickly changes his clothes then accelerated towards the hospital.
He opened the door and saw her lying on the bed with two body guards beside her. That scene made his heart cry, if only feelings could be heard. He might wake up Shin Hye through the sobs of his heart..
"You two, leave us first"
The two bowed and followed him, "Ah Sir, she was calling out your name a while ago, maybe she was really in pain"
"Thanks for telling me that, and thank you for looking after her"
Then the two leaves
He immediately takes the seat beside her. She's unconscious, yet he know that she could hear him (The sense of hearing is the last to stop if you die, and is still there when you're unsconscious, you could actually hear things, but can't see them - keke. infominute) He holds her hand slowly, he's hesitating, coz he's ashamed of his self. He's hand was shaking until he touches her soft hand
From that a tear fell from his eyes...
"I'm here now, I'm sorry.. just now. Your husband is just so stupid, calling out your name in the morning, when you're at the hospital since last night. He's supposed to be by your side first not your body guards but he was beside his drinkmates, laughing and laughing, while you're having head aches. Your husband is just so unthoughtful, turning off his phone when you're asking him to drive for you." He was suddenly cut off by his own sniff "Your husband is so stubborn, you've told him to quit smoking and lessen drinking, but he didn't hear you out. I keep on saying I love you but I keep on messing up things. They think that you've got the best husband in the world, but they didn't know that this idol keeps on hurting you. I know.. I know I've said this a thousand times, even I is getting sick using these words over and over again, I feel so helpless, asking for your forgiveness, but soon, I''ll just gonna hurt you again.. Thank you for your long patience.. uhmm, will you forgive me this time? Will you accept my apology for the thousandth time? Shin Hye-ah, yobo, sarang hae.."
From that, a tear fell of from her eyes even they were closed
He was really moved then he wiped off the tear on her face "Please be fine, I love you"
With his hand holding hers, he fell asleep
---
"Ahh" He feeds her grapes
"Aish yoba, I'll stay in the hospital longer if you're gonna let me eat this much"
"Aish, you need them"
"Look at the table, is it New Year's eve? Full of fruits.. geez"
"Ahh" he feeds her lime
"ommo, lime!" she smiles
He smiled too " Yes, liiiiime. Eat a lot Minyu"
Both of them laughed
Their eyes are now on the TV screen, the accident has reached the media, and fans were sending their affections to her
"May I sit beside you?"
"Sure"
She moves a little, so he could sit beside her. He let her head lean on his chest and his other hand holding her hand, as if they were just in their room. They stayed at that position for a couple of minutes until the doctor comes in.
"Ommo, am I disturbing something?" she smiles
"Ah, ani" he smiled too then stood up, giving way to the doctor.
"That was unnecessary, I just want to ask how is she feeling now"
"I'm feeling better, thank you"
"Good, two days, and you can come out. And you need to see a physical therapist so your legs could recover faster. And after, please, no more late night sleeps. Sleep early, and have plenty of rest"
"Ahrasso doc" she said obediently
"I'll leave first"
"Thanks doc" he said
"You heard that? From now on, 9 PM and you're home. I'll fetch you, Ahrasso?"
"PFTHAHAHA" she burst in to laughter
"Why are you laughing?" he's quite confused
"What a strict husband.. as if he's following my rules" with one eyebrow raised
"Let's talk about that at home?" he requested
"Kekeke. Fine"
"Uhmm, yobo, may stomach is aching, please call the nurse"
"Nurse?" his looks teasing her
"Yah! Please, call her?"
"So you're more embarrassed to your husband than her huh?" he smirked
"It's jsut that.."
"Aish, aish, stand up" he helped her stand up.
He held her hand along with the dextrose stand. He supported her while she was sitting on the.. err.. bowl. He was smiling, she sees it
"Yah, why are you smiling?" she pouted
"I'm smiling not because of gross, I just imagined us growing old.. doing this kind of things. And, yeah supporting one another" he smiles again
This time, she returned the smile.
---
Finally, they're home. They're now lying on the bed.
He cuddles her,
"Err. Yobo, it's hot" she said
"Please, I just want to cuddle with you. I want to make up with the things I've done. I'm truly sorry, I love you..."
She smiled, and pulled her face buried from his shoulders, she held his neck, and then gave him a gentle kiss "Let's forget about that Jagiya, I love you too" and then goes back to her previous position
He squeezes her body more. "I'll change, I promise. This might take a long time, but bear with me please?"
"Alright, I'll help you.."
"Thanks, Ahhh.. I'm very lucky to have a wife like you"
"You really are, so instead of drinking with your friends you should spend the night more often with me. Kekeke"
"Yah!"
The both of them laughed
"Oh, maybe you want it now?"
"Ani, I'm kidding, I'm still feeling weak"
"Tch, I'll let it pass tonight" he went near her ears and whispered "But be ready to get tired again, as soon as you've fully recovered" Both of them laughs
He nibbles her earlobe
"Ahh.. yobo, just sleep, don't worry I promise to recover fast"
The two giggled until both of them fall asleep
-
Hello! Sorry for this delayed post. And didn't used smileys at this, because the edited one-the one with smileys was erased. Owww. And I don't want to repeat it all over again. Kekeke
"Yobo, would you try to quit smoking and minimize your drinking?"
They were at the terrace, he's behind her locking himself to her.
He did not said anything, instead sighs
With that sigh, she turns around to face her "Please? Change.... slowly?" she compromised
"I'll try"
She's tired of those "I'll try" replies, from there she knew that he won't. Maybe it's time, time to be strict for his steps in changing
---
She moved in the house like a ninja, shaking, flipping, throwing, peeking at every possible place of packs of cigarette. She gathered them, then burned each pack outside.
Keun Suk enters their house and sees her "What the?!" she pulled her by the arms
"What do you think you're doing? Burning these cigarettes and messing with my things?"
"Maybe we should do it this way, coz you're not listening"
"Why do you keep on interfering with these kind of things-smoking and drinking?"
She pulled herself away from him then went inside silently
---
"Don't wait for me, I'm with Hongki and company" was what he texts her
next day
"I'm drinking with my friends tonight, sleep early" was what he texts her
next day
"I'm drinking with my friends tonight, sleep early" was what he texts her
next day
"I'm drinking with my friends tonight, sleep early" was what he texts her
next day
"I'm drinking with my friends tonight, sleep early" was what he texts her
"Aish! Is this what you call minimizing?" she went downstairs calling out two bodyguards "Come with me, pali"
---
They arrived at the bar
She saw him drinking with BB and Jason
"Ommo, Suk, bye! You didn't tell us that you have a curfew" BB said
"What?!" he turn around and saw her with 2 body guards
"Get him" she diverted her attention to the two smiling men "Aish, he wants it this way"
"HAHA, good luck Shin Hye-ah! Take care" Jason replied
While Keun Suk, on the other side tries to break free from the big boys "Yah, I'm ordering you to release me"
"Don't mind him, just bring him to the car" she said with conviction
"Tch" he said looking so pissed
---
As soon as he woke up, he ran hurriedly towards the wash room.. then vomits.
Shin Hye, looking worried, ran towards him then rubs his back, surprisingly, Keun Suk throws her hand away
"What were you thinking when you fetched me from the bar? What do you think are they going to say about that? That you're in charge of everything? That I'm under you?" then wipes his mouth
"You're already vomitting from too much drinking yet you wanted to stay there.." she said with her eyes looking very soft then walked away
"What should I do?" she mumbles then smirks-a lightbulb sruck her head
---
The next day he woke up with a breakfast beside him, and Shin Hye not beside him. He gets the table then places in on his lap, he finds a note
Yobo,
Enjoy this breakfast. Sorry, didn't had the chance to eat with you, I'm in a hurry. I love you!
-Shin Hye
Of course, he can't help but smile, but his expression cha nge when he saw a pack of cigarette beside his coffee.
"What is she thinking" he mumbles
"Whatever, I'll just enjoy this"
He tastes the omelet
"Ahh. I'm dying with a happy tongue.."
Since it's a day off for him, he decided to sleep all day inside their room, yes "their" room, ahhh.. so nice to say.
His sleeping was interfered by a knock on the door
"What is it?" he uttered lazily
"Sir, a package was sent for you"
"Aish" he stands up then pulls a hirt randomly then wore them.
He went downstairs then signs the form
"Bring that to my room" he orders
As soon as the box was with him in his room, he opened them.. and yes, was shocked when he saw what's inside
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
"Box full of packs of cigarettes?" he said with a very confused expression
His phone rung
"Hello?"
"Hello, yobo, did you like it?"
"Hey, what are you thinking?"
"Why? Don't you like it? Call me if you need more" then hangs up
"Aish, this girl! She really is..Aish!" but of course, he can't help but try them *smirks*
---
Everyday, she would do something related to cigarettes, should would either put them with his breakfast, Khan, a package, his dinner his lunch, his pencil holder, and bath tub -reverse psychology. Still, he had no response. Nothing has really changed.. Even his drinking, in fact he drinks a lot more..
Of course, everyone would get tired when he/she gives effort yet receiving nothing, when you're trying to figure out something, yet nothing has changed..
From there she stopped.. She's quite depressed, fine depressed. She's his wife, yet he can't change him, he can't do anything for him to be a better man..
He's quite confused by her actions, she's cold towards him, and the cigarettes had stopped. (Though he still have stocks.. Kekeke)
He still drinks. He still smokes.
---
It's 1 in the morning and she's still busy reviewing her script in her workplace. Her manager told her to do it at home but she insisted to do it there because, she would surely sleep as soon as she sees the bed. She's dead tired, but she needs to finish it... and sleeping at home is not the solution. Oh, I forgot to tell you that she's the only one left in the building, well except for the guards. 1:30 she started packing up and left the building. While she's going downstairs, she felt that everything's moving, maybe because of lack of sleep. She didn't mind it then proceeded to the parking lot, she felt her head ache again, she gave her head a little massage but that didn't helped. She texted Keun Suk if he can fetch her, since his manager left and he let his driver go home-he said that there's an emergency. 2 minutes and there is no reply.
Meanwhile..
Keun Suk's having fun with his friends. And as soon as he saw a message coming from her, he didn't tried to open it, instead turned his cellphone off.
And then drinks again! Yeah!
She tries to call her, he answered. Yes, the recorded voice answered. "Aish! Seems like I have no choice but to drive myself"
She started driving her head aches again, then.... *crash*
---
He wakes up, and as if it was already part of his routine, he rushes to the toilet bowl.. then vomits. He's quite curious why no one followed him and patted his back. He grabbed some tissue paper to wipe his mouth then went outside. He didn't saw any sign of Shin Hye in their room, so he went out and called for her.
"Shin Hye!" he yelled, "Shin Hye.." -no answer.. "Shin Hye!" he said while going downstairs.
There, he met their helper. "Ahjumma, have you seen Shin Hye?"
He was confused by her expression, she's shock and wondering "Uh, mwo? What's the matter?"
"You didn't know sir? She's at the hospital since last night. She met a car accident"
It's like his mind buffed for a second. "W-what?!"
He ran towards their room and saw his phone turned off, he quickly turns it on and messages flooded it
"Yobo, can you please fetch me? I'm quite dizzy"
"Yobo.. where are you?"
"Yobo..please? I"m serious, I'm not playing tricks on you"
"Your phone is off.. Where are you?"
"Keun Suk-ah please? Please?"
T'was like cold water was spilled to him. His heart is beating faster. He puts his hand on his forehead.. He quickly changes his clothes then accelerated towards the hospital.
He opened the door and saw her lying on the bed with two body guards beside her. That scene made his heart cry, if only feelings could be heard. He might wake up Shin Hye through the sobs of his heart..
"You two, leave us first"
The two bowed and followed him, "Ah Sir, she was calling out your name a while ago, maybe she was really in pain"
"Thanks for telling me that, and thank you for looking after her"
Then the two leaves
He immediately takes the seat beside her. She's unconscious, yet he know that she could hear him (The sense of hearing is the last to stop if you die, and is still there when you're unsconscious, you could actually hear things, but can't see them - keke. infominute) He holds her hand slowly, he's hesitating, coz he's ashamed of his self. He's hand was shaking until he touches her soft hand
From that a tear fell from his eyes...
"I'm here now, I'm sorry.. just now. Your husband is just so stupid, calling out your name in the morning, when you're at the hospital since last night. He's supposed to be by your side first not your body guards but he was beside his drinkmates, laughing and laughing, while you're having head aches. Your husband is just so unthoughtful, turning off his phone when you're asking him to drive for you." He was suddenly cut off by his own sniff "Your husband is so stubborn, you've told him to quit smoking and lessen drinking, but he didn't hear you out. I keep on saying I love you but I keep on messing up things. They think that you've got the best husband in the world, but they didn't know that this idol keeps on hurting you. I know.. I know I've said this a thousand times, even I is getting sick using these words over and over again, I feel so helpless, asking for your forgiveness, but soon, I''ll just gonna hurt you again.. Thank you for your long patience.. uhmm, will you forgive me this time? Will you accept my apology for the thousandth time? Shin Hye-ah, yobo, sarang hae.."
From that, a tear fell of from her eyes even they were closed
He was really moved then he wiped off the tear on her face "Please be fine, I love you"
With his hand holding hers, he fell asleep
---
"Ahh" He feeds her grapes
"Aish yoba, I'll stay in the hospital longer if you're gonna let me eat this much"
"Aish, you need them"
"Look at the table, is it New Year's eve? Full of fruits.. geez"
"Ahh" he feeds her lime
"ommo, lime!" she smiles
He smiled too " Yes, liiiiime. Eat a lot Minyu"
Both of them laughed
Their eyes are now on the TV screen, the accident has reached the media, and fans were sending their affections to her
"May I sit beside you?"
"Sure"
She moves a little, so he could sit beside her. He let her head lean on his chest and his other hand holding her hand, as if they were just in their room. They stayed at that position for a couple of minutes until the doctor comes in.
"Ommo, am I disturbing something?" she smiles
"Ah, ani" he smiled too then stood up, giving way to the doctor.
"That was unnecessary, I just want to ask how is she feeling now"
"I'm feeling better, thank you"
"Good, two days, and you can come out. And you need to see a physical therapist so your legs could recover faster. And after, please, no more late night sleeps. Sleep early, and have plenty of rest"
"Ahrasso doc" she said obediently
"I'll leave first"
"Thanks doc" he said
"You heard that? From now on, 9 PM and you're home. I'll fetch you, Ahrasso?"
"PFTHAHAHA" she burst in to laughter
"Why are you laughing?" he's quite confused
"What a strict husband.. as if he's following my rules" with one eyebrow raised
"Let's talk about that at home?" he requested
"Kekeke. Fine"
"Uhmm, yobo, may stomach is aching, please call the nurse"
"Nurse?" his looks teasing her
"Yah! Please, call her?"
"So you're more embarrassed to your husband than her huh?" he smirked
"It's jsut that.."
"Aish, aish, stand up" he helped her stand up.
He held her hand along with the dextrose stand. He supported her while she was sitting on the.. err.. bowl. He was smiling, she sees it
"Yah, why are you smiling?" she pouted
"I'm smiling not because of gross, I just imagined us growing old.. doing this kind of things. And, yeah supporting one another" he smiles again
This time, she returned the smile.
---
Finally, they're home. They're now lying on the bed.
He cuddles her,
"Err. Yobo, it's hot" she said
"Please, I just want to cuddle with you. I want to make up with the things I've done. I'm truly sorry, I love you..."
She smiled, and pulled her face buried from his shoulders, she held his neck, and then gave him a gentle kiss "Let's forget about that Jagiya, I love you too" and then goes back to her previous position
He squeezes her body more. "I'll change, I promise. This might take a long time, but bear with me please?"
"Alright, I'll help you.."
"Thanks, Ahhh.. I'm very lucky to have a wife like you"
"You really are, so instead of drinking with your friends you should spend the night more often with me. Kekeke"
"Yah!"
The both of them laughed
"Oh, maybe you want it now?"
"Ani, I'm kidding, I'm still feeling weak"
"Tch, I'll let it pass tonight" he went near her ears and whispered "But be ready to get tired again, as soon as you've fully recovered" Both of them laughs
He nibbles her earlobe
"Ahh.. yobo, just sleep, don't worry I promise to recover fast"
The two giggled until both of them fall asleep
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Hello! Sorry for this delayed post. And didn't used smileys at this, because the edited one-the one with smileys was erased. Owww. And I don't want to repeat it all over again. Kekeke
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