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Let me Try (One Shots)
mssweet821- Gold Wings
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thanks again ....wow....it maybe sad but I love the ending....nakakainlove masarap mainlove
lycille- Manager - The Striker
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wahhhhhhhhh......
so emotional....huhuhuhu...
it makes my heart cry........
notnessssssssssssss thank YOU........
still their LOVE for each other is FOREVER :)
hayzzzz love it :)
so emotional....huhuhuhu...
it makes my heart cry........
notnessssssssssssss thank YOU........
still their LOVE for each other is FOREVER :)
hayzzzz love it :)
khulet29- Asma - The Hacker
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@notness.. when will you post your new ff? ahihii
mianhe excited much lang ahahah LOL!
notnecessarytoknowme- FanFic Writer
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3000 posts! Waaaah... thanks! Didn't expect too much views of my works, that is why I was blown away when I checked this site. Big thanks! Sorry if I haven't posted yet... Quite busy this past few days.
khulet29- Asma - The Hacker
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@notness.. waaahh! miss you ff updates.. ahihihi
notnecessarytoknowme- FanFic Writer
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3000 views* (correction to my previous post)
@khulynne29 -too bad, big things are happening, but I can't update. aww
@khulynne29 -too bad, big things are happening, but I can't update. aww
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@notness....why?
notnecessarytoknowme- FanFic Writer
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I'm working on our thesis, and a lot more projects
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@notness...ok...goodluck on your thesis and may you finish all your projects..
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@notness...ok...goodluck on your thesis and may you finish all your projects..
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hello @notness...
this will be my first time posting a comment here..
I've read all your ff, i've saved it in my phone so i wasn't able to post here and tell you how much i'm thankful and glad to your ff.. and made me feel like i'm inlove too..kekeke
u'r a pinoy too right? SALUDO AKO SAYO!kekeke.. :)
I'll be waiting for more but take your time, thesis is more impt.. ~hugs~
Goodluck *fighting*
this will be my first time posting a comment here..
I've read all your ff, i've saved it in my phone so i wasn't able to post here and tell you how much i'm thankful and glad to your ff.. and made me feel like i'm inlove too..kekeke
u'r a pinoy too right? SALUDO AKO SAYO!kekeke.. :)
I'll be waiting for more but take your time, thesis is more impt.. ~hugs~
Goodluck *fighting*
notnecessarytoknowme- FanFic Writer
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Sinong may link ng GeunGeun? Pasend sakin privately, thanks ;)
Oh? And updates? Good news, exams and projects done, so maybe on Sunday! Yahoo!
Oh? And updates? Good news, exams and projects done, so maybe on Sunday! Yahoo!
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still no new fan fic yet?hmmmm...so sad
notnecessarytoknowme- FanFic Writer
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HELLO! Long time no post! Guess what? It's our graduation tomorrow! Yes I'm that young HAHA. And, I can guarantee you updates after that! Yahoooo...
lycille- Manager - The Striker
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congrats NOTNESS!!!!
wow......young and talented....bravoh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
we just here waiting for your new FF...miss yah
wow......young and talented....bravoh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
we just here waiting for your new FF...miss yah
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congrats notness!!!!!
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congrats notness!!!!!
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@notness.. nakanaks! CHUKAE sis :D
i miss your ff updates.. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!
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@notness kakamiss update mo sis... ahihihi
excited na kong makabasa ng latest ff from you.. waaahhh
notnecessarytoknowme- FanFic Writer
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(continuation)
2ND DAY
-special breakfast
-take a bath together
-try all water activities
-special lunch
-sleep!!!
-zip line - 10x
-walk along the shoreline (with them twisting their neck, following my wife's direction)
-witness the sunset together
-dinner
-night gimmicks (watch fire dance, drink :D, party!)
-shower together
-sleep comfortably with her
Sunlight touched their faces that made them awake. They woke up under a thick comforter, both naked.They are in the most comfortable position a couple may sleep. Him holding her while she sleep on his chest.
"Good morning!" He said as he saw her slowly opening her eyes.
She looked at him and smiled, nothing ever beats seeing him first thing in the morning
"Good morning, jagiya"
"Good morning too baby" he lifted his body up then kissed her tummy. He returned to his previous position.
"Ahhh, it's so comfortable here"
"Of course, you slept in my arms"
"Aniyo, the comforters are really nice"
"You did not sleep on the comforter, you slept on my chest the whole night.. and you were smiling"
"How would you know if I am smiling?"
"I can feel it with my chest, and that's really a good feeling, it was like kissing while you can feel your partner smiling" he said proudly
"Ahhh, yea... feeling your partner smile during a kiss really feels good"
"You like that too? Hmmm, so you liked our kiss during the taping of You're Beautiful, huh?" he said smirking
"PftHAHAHA. Fine, I'll admit that I enjoyed that, that's why I was restless"
"HAHAHAHA" he laughed over her little confession.
She pouted.
"Owwww"
He pouted too then leaned forward to give her a good morning kiss "That's for this morning".
She was tickled when he kissed her
"Aish, I think we should shave those hair off"
He touches his face to feel them.
"But girls like them thick"
"But I like it clean" She puts stress on the word I
"Oh, fine"
He stands up to go to the washroom and shave. He gets the shaving cream and is about to apply some but Shin Hye interferes.
"Let me do that for you, yeobo" She smiles.
She applies a reasonable amount on some parts of his face and rubs it.
"Ahhh, feels good"
She gets the blade then starts to shave those unnecessary hair off, but he's too tall for her, so she tiptoes. But, Keun Suk, being the caring one, carries her and puts her on top of the sink, so she could sit there comfortably. Now that she's on the same level with him, she starts.
Not yet, satisfied, he snakes his arms on her lower back.
"This is just so intimate" she said, making the both of them love.
*Sheve* *shave* *shave*
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I know, I know! This is too short HAHAHA. Apologies. HAHAHA
This is supposed to be a continuation of Three-shot story I made right? But, ahhh, writer's block. Maybe because of not writing for a long time. I know how much you hate writers who do not continue their stories, coz I hate them too, but I think, I will be one of them Hahaha. I'll pause with this three-shot and write about it again when I have something to write. So, if you would permit... I'll start another story. HIHI. I'll still write, k?
Happy Easter, cheers!:)
keep believing,
-notnecessarytoknowme
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khulet29- Asma - The Hacker
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waaaaaaaaahhhhh bitin pero super kilig! ahahahah
shave
shave
shave...
please write a new one sis ness ahihihi
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Noneness, love it. Simple, short, sweet and satisfied. Keep writing pls. Especially keunshin love stories. Thanks for all the wonderful stories posted.
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notness thanks a lot!..love it!!
notnecessarytoknowme- FanFic Writer
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Re: Let me Try (One Shots)
Take this as a substitution for my unfinished story.
Parental Guidance is advised; Contains cuss(Just look at the first line HAHA) and intimate scenes.
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"Ah! Shit, freaking hot" Keun Suk exclaimed, feeling the beads of sweat dripping off his skin.
*Car door opens*
His meeting eyebrows changed to concave lines as he sees that gorgeous lady sitting at the backseat of his new SUV. He smiled, wrong, he grinned.
He looks fresh at this kind of weather? I know, I know, I'm the lucky boyfriend.
And what's the secret handshake of couples? Kiss. Yeah right, kiss. Therefore, smack on the lips coming up!
*MWAH*
He's about to hug her too, but she refused.
"Uh, you stink" with matching lined facial expression.
He sat beside her.
"Psh. If I know, you like my wet look" he smirked
"Dream on."
Being that avant hye, she grabs a bottle of water near her, which she prepared beforehand, knowing the hot weather.
"Oppa, drink this" she handed him the bottle
"Ah, thanks, at last, water, cooooold water" he gobbled down the content of the bottle.
She gets a towel then wipes off his sweat on his face. He makes face, like that of a baby when he is pampered. She makes him turn around, she's about to wipe his back, so she pulled off his coat, disposing it at the back row of the car. Now, he's wearing a body fit black and white striped tank top. Yeap, as hot as the weather.
She puts her hand underneath it then does that little affection for him.
"Yay! Omma, I'm not a kid anymore"
"Fine, I'll stop" she removes her hand
He turns his face to her, "Hey, I'm kidding. I like being pampered, please, please?" he pouts with his puppy eyes.
"Psh" she goes back to what she's doing a while ago.
She grabs a cream beside her.
Seriously, what else are there inside that paper bag? Anyways, I'm going to enjoy this. Lucky me again
"Come closer oppa, I'll remove your make up" she orders him.
She applies a fair amout on her palm; She then spreads it to his face and gently massaged it.
It's your time Keun Suk! He pulls her closer, he grabs her by her waist.
"Ah, you're lucky, there's this cream that would remove that uncomfortable thing on your face"
"Yes, yes. I know I'm lucky" He grins, thinking what he had just said about being lucky.
She grabs a tissue, again, from that paper bag. She wipes of the cream together with the make-up on his face.
"Aren't you irritated? It's hot" she said, quite puzzled.
"You're there, so it's fine"
"Yeah, whatever"
"Tie up your hair" she adds, then handed him a pony (err? sounds gay HAHA)
He follows her command, "There, happy?"
She chuckles, "Yes, you look cute" she then tucks some misplaced hair behind his ears.
"Uhmm, what's next?" he questions
"Ah, yah" she grabs another towel inside that bag
"Seriouly, how many towels you got in there?"
"Aish, stop asking, you're the one benefiting from it, and I know you like it" she said, without even looking at him, instead she got herself busy;
She dampens the towel with cold water. She knows that feeling, that sticky feeling after work, with lots of people surrounding you, plus, the hot weather. So being the caring girlfriend, maybe she could make him feel better.
"Chin up" she orders him, he obeys.
"Ahh, feels good" he closes his eyes as she damps the wet cloth on his neck.
Seconds later, on his face, arms, then freeze.
"What?" he asks her, he's puzzled, she's just staring at his torso.
He smirks.
Hesitating, huh? Let's get naughty.
He grabs her hand that holds the towel, then raises his tank top. He then leads her hand to his chest, he cannot hold his grin anymore. Then all of sudden...
She pinches his nose with her free hand "Aish! I hate you!"
He laughs, "You look cute Jagiya" he leans towards her that kisses the tip of her nose, which made her crinkle her bridge.
She hands her the towel "Oh, wipe yourself"
He gets it, and does what she had just said. After using the towel, he throws it to the back row of the car.
"Hey, hey, hey! Look at that, you're just going to throw that like that?! Give it to me"
"Tch" he hands her back the towel
She gets something under the chair and unfolds it, it's a small hamper. "Here, you put all damp clothes here, ahrasso?"
"Yes ma'am"
"Tss, what would happen to our room when we get married. Tae Kyung's a clean freak you know" she was still busy fixing things.
"Wait, what? What have you just said?" he asks, smirking.
"What?"
"Repeat that"
"What?"
"Not that, before that"
"Aish! I forgot"
"You said, when we get married? So, you really are planning to marry me?" he sounded excited.
"Really? I said that?"
He hugs her "Now, I can hug you. Don't feel embarrassed Jagiya, I'm thinking of marrying you too, lately, I have been daydreaming about that too much."
"You even thought it huh?"
"No, I mean, you might reject me you know, and that would hurt."
"What made you think that I'll be rejecting you?"
"Uhm, nothing, aish! Stop figthing with me"
"But yo-"
"I love you" he said that to shut her up
"Fine! I love you too!" she said in a pissed tone
(awww, cute :">)
Oh, have I told you where are they going? No? So here's their plan.
FIRST: She gets everything prepared by 11
SECOND: She, with his driver will be picking him up through the back door of the concert hall by 1
THIRD: He must be fast in signing those freaking albums, magazines or whatsoever
FOURTH: Joy ride to ??? Of course, paparazzi there and here, we can't name the place, but it's somewhere far, that you need to have a 6 hour ride.
"I'm sleepy, may I?" he looks at her lap, trying to ask permission to lie on that spot.
She taps her lap, showing approval.She gets a pillow, then places it on her lap.
"Ah, feels good" he smiles.
"You're grinning like an idiot there"
"Quiet" he shuts his eyes
"Yeah, fine" she traces his facial features, then soon rested her hand on his hair, near his forehead, caressing it. After a couple of minutes, he stirs. He turns towards her tummy, and rests his hand on the small of her back.
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He opens his eyes and sees her in an uncomfortable position, her head leaning forward, looking for suppot, she's sleeping. So, he carefully sat up not to wake her up, and pulls her head towards his chest.
"Sleep tight, baby" he smiles as he closes his eyes.
After 54597498 hours, he wakes up. He remembers that they haven't eaten yet.
"Ahjussi, take a break when you pass by a gas station please" he commands.
"Ahrasso Keun Suk-ssi"
He steps on the break.
"Shin Hye, wake up, we're going to eat" he taps her cheek gently.
She slowly opens her eyes "I cooked something for us."
His eyes grew huge because of excitement "Really?"
"Ahjussi, here" he hands him money "Buy anything you like, Java chip for me and Shin Hye-ah, what do you want?"
"Same" she smiles
"Oh, ahrasso, 2 Cafe Americano, you may stay there for a while if you want to eat, or share with us"
"Ah, I'll stay there, that's what you want, I think. I'm disturbing something here, maybe." he laughs
"Ahjussi!" both of them laughs.
"Ahrasso, I'll go first" the driver said as he left the car.
"Here" she said as she brought a lunch box out of that paper bag again.
Kimchi pizza.
"This is too few for me!" he stares at the food, full of amazement.
"Aish, stop flattering me, that won't work"
"I'm telling the truth. Well, whatever. Let's eat"
"Ahrasso" she gets a pair of chopsticks.
"Where's mine?"
"Where's what?"
"Chopsticks."
"Mwo? I made this for me, and only for me" she's about to put a piece of the kimchi in to her mouth but he holds her hand, and swiftly, it landed his mouth.
He munches the food, and grins like an idiot. "I knew it, you want to feed me, that's why you brought one pair of chopsticks"
"You're dreaming again."
"You're denying again."
"Psh." but her words are the total opposite of her action...
She grabs another piece "Ahhh"
He chews again "Hmm, tastes great." he said, still smiling.
*eat* eat*
He burps "Excuse me, ahh, I'm full"
"Not obvious"
Both of them laughs.
"Err. You have any desserts there?"
"Ah! That's what I forgot!"
"It's okay, maybe I can have a special dessert here" he said in a sexy, husky voice.
She giggles, "What?! Stop it..."
He leans forward while smirking then...
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KISS!
After a couple of seconds, the kiss deepens, and deepens! They're about to burn, he pushes her gently so as not to break the kiss, she is now leaning on the glass tinted window. She snakes her arms on his nape. Her right arm grips on his hair. He takes hold of her waist, demanding something more intimate.
*car door opens*
"Keun Suk-ssi, here's your order" the driver said joyfully
Both of them sat up straight swiftly.
"Oh, I'm sorry for disturbing you, I'll leave it here, and I'll take a walk around, just call me, Sir" he leaves the two cups on the driver's chair then leaves.
While the two... both of them are panting, and sweating, yeah.
He's trying to calm his body down, but there's something lacking, he doesn't know. Fuck urges.
In a split second, he is kissing her again.
She feels like she need to stop here, or else it would be harder to stop later, but her body's not listening. Ah, this is crazy.
He made a transition, a fierce kiss to somewhat gentler. Eventually, he stops, he leans his forehead on hers. "Look, I'm sorry." He pants, he is now looking on her eyes.
"I trust you" she said firmly.
He smiles at that thought "Thank you." he holds her cheeks then rubs them back and forth with his thumb, then he kisses her forehead.
"Maybe, we need this" he gets the cups and hands one to her "Here"
"Yeah, I think so, thanks"
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"This.is.great! Waaaah!" she exclaims as she throws herself to Keun Suk
He catches her "Oh God baby, you'll cause scandal, we're still in Korea." he whispers
She giggles on her remarks, she stands on her feet "Yeah, fine. But... nothing, I was just amazed"
He doesn't let go of her waist "You like it?"
"Of course, how did you know about this place?" she smiles
"That's a secret, if I'll tell you now, you won't be surprised on our next trips."
"Hmf, fine, let's fix our things first" she suggests.
The two of them went inside the villa and *fix* *fix* *fix*
"Oppa, what are you doing there lying on the bed? Let's swim!" she said excitedly
"What?! Night swimming? It's cold!"
If there's one thing that could break diamonds, then that would be her pout, the strongest defense mechanism, ever.
She pouts.
"I'm not looking" he closes his eyes, his near his defeat.
"Oppaaaaaaaaaa"
"Psh" he stands up and takes her hand "C'mon"
She chuckles "Yay, thanks Oppa"
As they step out the villa, it's too late. He didn't notice a while ago that she was wearing a one piece clothing. Yep, one piece, coz she's reserving her two piece for tomorrow. Hihi.
"Aren't you cold?" he's wearing a boardwalk shorts and black tank top.
"No" she replied shortly.
And just in time as he was starting to build up worries on other men's eyes looking at her, he saw a Korean at their age looking and smirking at her.
His protective mechanism: to wrap one arm on her shoulders.
He kissed the side of her temple.
"What was that for?"
"Nothing, just building up fences around you."
She smirks. She could sense that someone's eyeing on her that's why he did that. A naughty plan comes into her mind. She faces him and takes a hold of his cheek and...
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She kissed his mouth fully.
"That's how you build fences" she whispered.
*laughs*
*walk* *walk* *walk*
*stroll on the coast* *stroll on the coast* *stroll on the coast*
After a long walk, giggles and stories, they decided to go inside, coz it's getting colder, freakin' colder. The same intensity of hotness at day is the coldness at night. Crazy weather, crazy.
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"You take a bath first" he suggests
"Ahrasso" she walks in the bathroom.
All the while, he's been hearing splashes of water, and unfortunately, that raised his temperature. He rolls on the bed. "This. is. torture"
She steps out the bathroom.
-Oversized tees and shorts? Harder than I thought. Argh, but... that's better then lingeries. he encourages his self.
"E-ehem. I'll take a bath now"
"Alright"
While inside the bathroom, he's only wish is for her to be asleep -Please? Please, sleep now
He steps out of the bathroom "Thank God, she's asleep, and she's facing the wall" he whispers.
He carefully joins her in bed, he takes a deep breath.
"Goodnight Jagiya", he said as he turns towards the other side, not facing her.
He's now relax but he feels her stirring, and...
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An arm on his torso
-Ommo, ommo, what to do?
"Err, Shin Hye?"
"Hmmm?"
"Don't be mad with this, but please don't do that"
"Mwo?"
"I can feel uhmm, something on my back"
She teases him by hugging him tighter and kissing his nape.
"Shin Hye!"
She giggles "Mianhe, fine. Goodnight, love you Jagiya!" she turns.
"Love you too" he gulps
-Now sleep Keun Suk, sleep.
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"Wow, confident, huh?" she said, because he's wearing boardwalk shorts, and boardwalk shorts alone. You heard that right ladies, topless.
"Look who's talking in two piece" he smirks
"At least I gave justice to this clothing"
"No, you didn't"
"Fine, I'll ask him to put lotion all over me." she smirks inside
"Who's him?"
"That Korean boy last night?"
"Hey, hey, hey!"
She runs. He runs after.
He catches her by the waist and lifts her off the ground and twirls.
"Ah put me down"
Both of them giggles.
He puts her down on a chair and applies sunblock on her body and gives her a little massage.
"Thanks Jagiya"
"No problem, come let's swim"
*Swim* *Swim* *swim*
That day was tiring. Swimming, ziplining, eating, bickering and everything that would describe a cute couple.
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"Let's visit the bar there, they say that night life here is great" he suggests
"C'mon" she pulls his hand
"That was fast"
Both of them laughs.
Upbeat music, alcohol, fire dancers, and wild crowd.
This is great -Keun Suk
The two of them drank, Keun Suk, the great drinker wasn't affected by the drinks at all. But she... she said she would try drinking until she pass out, this time only, besides, she's with Keun Suk.
She was dancing wildly in the middle of the dance floor, holding a drink on one of her hands.
"Stop that" he grabs her glass.
Instead of giving it to him, she walks pass him and goes directly to the bartender. He follows.
"One more please" she bangs her glass hard on the marble counter. He takes the glass.
"No" he said firmly and leaves money more than what is needed beside the glass.
"Yah, I want more"
He carries her and said nothing.
*walk* *walk* *walk* *door opens*
He lays her on the bed. He's about to go the bathroom but she pulls him closer, causing him to be on top of her.
"Shit, shit" he mumbles due to their intimate position.
She kissed her passionately. Their hands everywhere. He leaves a love mark on her neck, she moans.
"Fuck, I need to stop" his body betraying him.
He pulls her bra and left a trail of kisses all over her breasts.
*xxx* *xxx* *xxx*
He positioned his body between her legs until...
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She passed out?!
"Shit, thanks Shin Hye"
He hurriedly lay one of the blankets on the floar, wore his shorts and decided to sleep on the floor. It is when he realized that what he did was wrong, he took advantage of her.
"Argh, we almost did it"
*Chicken sound*
It's 8 in the morning.
She heard splashing of water inside the comfort room, he's taking a bath.
"Argh, may head hurts" she felt something weird, she peeks inside the blanket and guest what?
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She's naked!
She was still shocked, but she swiftly got his tees which was the clothing closest to her. She picked her undergarments too and put them to place.
He gets out of the bathroom.
"Wh-what happened?!" she asked nervously
He smirks "Don't you remember Jagiya?"
She's nervous now than ever. She's teary eyed now.
"Why? Are you regretting what we did?" he challenged her.
"It's not that... but..." a tear went down through her cheek, she looks the other side, not facing him.
"Shin Hye" he approach her, and hugs her from the back. "I'm sorry, for the record, nothing happened last night. Yes, we almost did it, but you passed out, so thanks for that, we didn't pursue." He kissed her tears away.
"I'm sorry too, I should have listen to you last night"
"Forgiven. Don't drink too much when you go out huh" he sounded concern
"See, you didn't remember what happened last night" he added
"I drank to death coz I'm with you" she defended
"And I think, that's more dangerous"
Both of them laughs.
"Oh, take a bath now, we'll go to the souvenir shop after"
"Ahrasso" and gave a peck on his cheek.
---
Couple shirts, bracelets, anklets, caps, shades, and anything that comes in pair, they bought it. Now they're riding their way home.
"You made it hard for me during those past days"
"I'm sorry, I'm that hot"
"No, you seduced me"
"I did not! I was effortlessly seducing you"
"HAHA, you really are crazy"
"And you love that crazy girl"
"I don't"
"Really?" she pulls him by his shirt, and draws her face closer.
"Oh, see!"
"What?! I'm smelling your aftershave"
"Psh. Whatever you say."
They are lying, face to face on the back row of the car, Keun Suk adjusted the sit, as if they are lying.
"We could have sleep this way before, instead of you lying on my lap, you gave me a hard time"
Both of them laughs
"But I want to sleep on your lap" he draws her closer until his face touches his chest.
"Now sleep.
"Sweet dreams, I love you"
"I love you too, dream of me." he replied
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Yepyep, different writing style this time.
Enjoy! Byie, off to my training
keep believing,
-notnecessarytoknowme
[justify]
Parental Guidance is advised; Contains cuss(Just look at the first line HAHA) and intimate scenes.
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"Ah! Shit, freaking hot" Keun Suk exclaimed, feeling the beads of sweat dripping off his skin.
*Car door opens*
His meeting eyebrows changed to concave lines as he sees that gorgeous lady sitting at the backseat of his new SUV. He smiled, wrong, he grinned.
He looks fresh at this kind of weather? I know, I know, I'm the lucky boyfriend.
And what's the secret handshake of couples? Kiss. Yeah right, kiss. Therefore, smack on the lips coming up!
*MWAH*
He's about to hug her too, but she refused.
"Uh, you stink" with matching lined facial expression.
He sat beside her.
"Psh. If I know, you like my wet look" he smirked
"Dream on."
Being that avant hye, she grabs a bottle of water near her, which she prepared beforehand, knowing the hot weather.
"Oppa, drink this" she handed him the bottle
"Ah, thanks, at last, water, cooooold water" he gobbled down the content of the bottle.
She gets a towel then wipes off his sweat on his face. He makes face, like that of a baby when he is pampered. She makes him turn around, she's about to wipe his back, so she pulled off his coat, disposing it at the back row of the car. Now, he's wearing a body fit black and white striped tank top. Yeap, as hot as the weather.
She puts her hand underneath it then does that little affection for him.
"Yay! Omma, I'm not a kid anymore"
"Fine, I'll stop" she removes her hand
He turns his face to her, "Hey, I'm kidding. I like being pampered, please, please?" he pouts with his puppy eyes.
"Psh" she goes back to what she's doing a while ago.
She grabs a cream beside her.
Seriously, what else are there inside that paper bag? Anyways, I'm going to enjoy this. Lucky me again
"Come closer oppa, I'll remove your make up" she orders him.
She applies a fair amout on her palm; She then spreads it to his face and gently massaged it.
It's your time Keun Suk! He pulls her closer, he grabs her by her waist.
"Ah, you're lucky, there's this cream that would remove that uncomfortable thing on your face"
"Yes, yes. I know I'm lucky" He grins, thinking what he had just said about being lucky.
She grabs a tissue, again, from that paper bag. She wipes of the cream together with the make-up on his face.
"Aren't you irritated? It's hot" she said, quite puzzled.
"You're there, so it's fine"
"Yeah, whatever"
"Tie up your hair" she adds, then handed him a pony (err? sounds gay HAHA)
He follows her command, "There, happy?"
She chuckles, "Yes, you look cute" she then tucks some misplaced hair behind his ears.
"Uhmm, what's next?" he questions
"Ah, yah" she grabs another towel inside that bag
"Seriouly, how many towels you got in there?"
"Aish, stop asking, you're the one benefiting from it, and I know you like it" she said, without even looking at him, instead she got herself busy;
She dampens the towel with cold water. She knows that feeling, that sticky feeling after work, with lots of people surrounding you, plus, the hot weather. So being the caring girlfriend, maybe she could make him feel better.
"Chin up" she orders him, he obeys.
"Ahh, feels good" he closes his eyes as she damps the wet cloth on his neck.
Seconds later, on his face, arms, then freeze.
"What?" he asks her, he's puzzled, she's just staring at his torso.
He smirks.
Hesitating, huh? Let's get naughty.
He grabs her hand that holds the towel, then raises his tank top. He then leads her hand to his chest, he cannot hold his grin anymore. Then all of sudden...
She pinches his nose with her free hand "Aish! I hate you!"
He laughs, "You look cute Jagiya" he leans towards her that kisses the tip of her nose, which made her crinkle her bridge.
She hands her the towel "Oh, wipe yourself"
He gets it, and does what she had just said. After using the towel, he throws it to the back row of the car.
"Hey, hey, hey! Look at that, you're just going to throw that like that?! Give it to me"
"Tch" he hands her back the towel
She gets something under the chair and unfolds it, it's a small hamper. "Here, you put all damp clothes here, ahrasso?"
"Yes ma'am"
"Tss, what would happen to our room when we get married. Tae Kyung's a clean freak you know" she was still busy fixing things.
"Wait, what? What have you just said?" he asks, smirking.
"What?"
"Repeat that"
"What?"
"Not that, before that"
"Aish! I forgot"
"You said, when we get married? So, you really are planning to marry me?" he sounded excited.
"Really? I said that?"
He hugs her "Now, I can hug you. Don't feel embarrassed Jagiya, I'm thinking of marrying you too, lately, I have been daydreaming about that too much."
"You even thought it huh?"
"No, I mean, you might reject me you know, and that would hurt."
"What made you think that I'll be rejecting you?"
"Uhm, nothing, aish! Stop figthing with me"
"But yo-"
"I love you" he said that to shut her up
"Fine! I love you too!" she said in a pissed tone
(awww, cute :">)
Oh, have I told you where are they going? No? So here's their plan.
FIRST: She gets everything prepared by 11
SECOND: She, with his driver will be picking him up through the back door of the concert hall by 1
THIRD: He must be fast in signing those freaking albums, magazines or whatsoever
FOURTH: Joy ride to ??? Of course, paparazzi there and here, we can't name the place, but it's somewhere far, that you need to have a 6 hour ride.
"I'm sleepy, may I?" he looks at her lap, trying to ask permission to lie on that spot.
She taps her lap, showing approval.She gets a pillow, then places it on her lap.
"Ah, feels good" he smiles.
"You're grinning like an idiot there"
"Quiet" he shuts his eyes
"Yeah, fine" she traces his facial features, then soon rested her hand on his hair, near his forehead, caressing it. After a couple of minutes, he stirs. He turns towards her tummy, and rests his hand on the small of her back.
---
He opens his eyes and sees her in an uncomfortable position, her head leaning forward, looking for suppot, she's sleeping. So, he carefully sat up not to wake her up, and pulls her head towards his chest.
"Sleep tight, baby" he smiles as he closes his eyes.
After 54597498 hours, he wakes up. He remembers that they haven't eaten yet.
"Ahjussi, take a break when you pass by a gas station please" he commands.
"Ahrasso Keun Suk-ssi"
He steps on the break.
"Shin Hye, wake up, we're going to eat" he taps her cheek gently.
She slowly opens her eyes "I cooked something for us."
His eyes grew huge because of excitement "Really?"
"Ahjussi, here" he hands him money "Buy anything you like, Java chip for me and Shin Hye-ah, what do you want?"
"Same" she smiles
"Oh, ahrasso, 2 Cafe Americano, you may stay there for a while if you want to eat, or share with us"
"Ah, I'll stay there, that's what you want, I think. I'm disturbing something here, maybe." he laughs
"Ahjussi!" both of them laughs.
"Ahrasso, I'll go first" the driver said as he left the car.
"Here" she said as she brought a lunch box out of that paper bag again.
Kimchi pizza.
"This is too few for me!" he stares at the food, full of amazement.
"Aish, stop flattering me, that won't work"
"I'm telling the truth. Well, whatever. Let's eat"
"Ahrasso" she gets a pair of chopsticks.
"Where's mine?"
"Where's what?"
"Chopsticks."
"Mwo? I made this for me, and only for me" she's about to put a piece of the kimchi in to her mouth but he holds her hand, and swiftly, it landed his mouth.
He munches the food, and grins like an idiot. "I knew it, you want to feed me, that's why you brought one pair of chopsticks"
"You're dreaming again."
"You're denying again."
"Psh." but her words are the total opposite of her action...
She grabs another piece "Ahhh"
He chews again "Hmm, tastes great." he said, still smiling.
*eat* eat*
He burps "Excuse me, ahh, I'm full"
"Not obvious"
Both of them laughs.
"Err. You have any desserts there?"
"Ah! That's what I forgot!"
"It's okay, maybe I can have a special dessert here" he said in a sexy, husky voice.
She giggles, "What?! Stop it..."
He leans forward while smirking then...
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KISS!
After a couple of seconds, the kiss deepens, and deepens! They're about to burn, he pushes her gently so as not to break the kiss, she is now leaning on the glass tinted window. She snakes her arms on his nape. Her right arm grips on his hair. He takes hold of her waist, demanding something more intimate.
*car door opens*
"Keun Suk-ssi, here's your order" the driver said joyfully
Both of them sat up straight swiftly.
"Oh, I'm sorry for disturbing you, I'll leave it here, and I'll take a walk around, just call me, Sir" he leaves the two cups on the driver's chair then leaves.
While the two... both of them are panting, and sweating, yeah.
He's trying to calm his body down, but there's something lacking, he doesn't know. Fuck urges.
In a split second, he is kissing her again.
She feels like she need to stop here, or else it would be harder to stop later, but her body's not listening. Ah, this is crazy.
He made a transition, a fierce kiss to somewhat gentler. Eventually, he stops, he leans his forehead on hers. "Look, I'm sorry." He pants, he is now looking on her eyes.
"I trust you" she said firmly.
He smiles at that thought "Thank you." he holds her cheeks then rubs them back and forth with his thumb, then he kisses her forehead.
"Maybe, we need this" he gets the cups and hands one to her "Here"
"Yeah, I think so, thanks"
---
"This.is.great! Waaaah!" she exclaims as she throws herself to Keun Suk
He catches her "Oh God baby, you'll cause scandal, we're still in Korea." he whispers
She giggles on her remarks, she stands on her feet "Yeah, fine. But... nothing, I was just amazed"
He doesn't let go of her waist "You like it?"
"Of course, how did you know about this place?" she smiles
"That's a secret, if I'll tell you now, you won't be surprised on our next trips."
"Hmf, fine, let's fix our things first" she suggests.
The two of them went inside the villa and *fix* *fix* *fix*
"Oppa, what are you doing there lying on the bed? Let's swim!" she said excitedly
"What?! Night swimming? It's cold!"
If there's one thing that could break diamonds, then that would be her pout, the strongest defense mechanism, ever.
She pouts.
"I'm not looking" he closes his eyes, his near his defeat.
"Oppaaaaaaaaaa"
"Psh" he stands up and takes her hand "C'mon"
She chuckles "Yay, thanks Oppa"
As they step out the villa, it's too late. He didn't notice a while ago that she was wearing a one piece clothing. Yep, one piece, coz she's reserving her two piece for tomorrow. Hihi.
"Aren't you cold?" he's wearing a boardwalk shorts and black tank top.
"No" she replied shortly.
And just in time as he was starting to build up worries on other men's eyes looking at her, he saw a Korean at their age looking and smirking at her.
His protective mechanism: to wrap one arm on her shoulders.
He kissed the side of her temple.
"What was that for?"
"Nothing, just building up fences around you."
She smirks. She could sense that someone's eyeing on her that's why he did that. A naughty plan comes into her mind. She faces him and takes a hold of his cheek and...
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She kissed his mouth fully.
"That's how you build fences" she whispered.
*laughs*
*walk* *walk* *walk*
*stroll on the coast* *stroll on the coast* *stroll on the coast*
After a long walk, giggles and stories, they decided to go inside, coz it's getting colder, freakin' colder. The same intensity of hotness at day is the coldness at night. Crazy weather, crazy.
---
"You take a bath first" he suggests
"Ahrasso" she walks in the bathroom.
All the while, he's been hearing splashes of water, and unfortunately, that raised his temperature. He rolls on the bed. "This. is. torture"
She steps out the bathroom.
-Oversized tees and shorts? Harder than I thought. Argh, but... that's better then lingeries. he encourages his self.
"E-ehem. I'll take a bath now"
"Alright"
While inside the bathroom, he's only wish is for her to be asleep -Please? Please, sleep now
He steps out of the bathroom "Thank God, she's asleep, and she's facing the wall" he whispers.
He carefully joins her in bed, he takes a deep breath.
"Goodnight Jagiya", he said as he turns towards the other side, not facing her.
He's now relax but he feels her stirring, and...
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An arm on his torso
-Ommo, ommo, what to do?
"Err, Shin Hye?"
"Hmmm?"
"Don't be mad with this, but please don't do that"
"Mwo?"
"I can feel uhmm, something on my back"
She teases him by hugging him tighter and kissing his nape.
"Shin Hye!"
She giggles "Mianhe, fine. Goodnight, love you Jagiya!" she turns.
"Love you too" he gulps
-Now sleep Keun Suk, sleep.
---
"Wow, confident, huh?" she said, because he's wearing boardwalk shorts, and boardwalk shorts alone. You heard that right ladies, topless.
"Look who's talking in two piece" he smirks
"At least I gave justice to this clothing"
"No, you didn't"
"Fine, I'll ask him to put lotion all over me." she smirks inside
"Who's him?"
"That Korean boy last night?"
"Hey, hey, hey!"
She runs. He runs after.
He catches her by the waist and lifts her off the ground and twirls.
"Ah put me down"
Both of them giggles.
He puts her down on a chair and applies sunblock on her body and gives her a little massage.
"Thanks Jagiya"
"No problem, come let's swim"
*Swim* *Swim* *swim*
That day was tiring. Swimming, ziplining, eating, bickering and everything that would describe a cute couple.
---
"Let's visit the bar there, they say that night life here is great" he suggests
"C'mon" she pulls his hand
"That was fast"
Both of them laughs.
Upbeat music, alcohol, fire dancers, and wild crowd.
This is great -Keun Suk
The two of them drank, Keun Suk, the great drinker wasn't affected by the drinks at all. But she... she said she would try drinking until she pass out, this time only, besides, she's with Keun Suk.
She was dancing wildly in the middle of the dance floor, holding a drink on one of her hands.
"Stop that" he grabs her glass.
Instead of giving it to him, she walks pass him and goes directly to the bartender. He follows.
"One more please" she bangs her glass hard on the marble counter. He takes the glass.
"No" he said firmly and leaves money more than what is needed beside the glass.
"Yah, I want more"
He carries her and said nothing.
*walk* *walk* *walk* *door opens*
He lays her on the bed. He's about to go the bathroom but she pulls him closer, causing him to be on top of her.
"Shit, shit" he mumbles due to their intimate position.
She kissed her passionately. Their hands everywhere. He leaves a love mark on her neck, she moans.
"Fuck, I need to stop" his body betraying him.
He pulls her bra and left a trail of kisses all over her breasts.
*xxx* *xxx* *xxx*
He positioned his body between her legs until...
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She passed out?!
"Shit, thanks Shin Hye"
He hurriedly lay one of the blankets on the floar, wore his shorts and decided to sleep on the floor. It is when he realized that what he did was wrong, he took advantage of her.
"Argh, we almost did it"
*Chicken sound*
It's 8 in the morning.
She heard splashing of water inside the comfort room, he's taking a bath.
"Argh, may head hurts" she felt something weird, she peeks inside the blanket and guest what?
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She's naked!
She was still shocked, but she swiftly got his tees which was the clothing closest to her. She picked her undergarments too and put them to place.
He gets out of the bathroom.
"Wh-what happened?!" she asked nervously
He smirks "Don't you remember Jagiya?"
She's nervous now than ever. She's teary eyed now.
"Why? Are you regretting what we did?" he challenged her.
"It's not that... but..." a tear went down through her cheek, she looks the other side, not facing him.
"Shin Hye" he approach her, and hugs her from the back. "I'm sorry, for the record, nothing happened last night. Yes, we almost did it, but you passed out, so thanks for that, we didn't pursue." He kissed her tears away.
"I'm sorry too, I should have listen to you last night"
"Forgiven. Don't drink too much when you go out huh" he sounded concern
"See, you didn't remember what happened last night" he added
"I drank to death coz I'm with you" she defended
"And I think, that's more dangerous"
Both of them laughs.
"Oh, take a bath now, we'll go to the souvenir shop after"
"Ahrasso" and gave a peck on his cheek.
---
Couple shirts, bracelets, anklets, caps, shades, and anything that comes in pair, they bought it. Now they're riding their way home.
"You made it hard for me during those past days"
"I'm sorry, I'm that hot"
"No, you seduced me"
"I did not! I was effortlessly seducing you"
"HAHA, you really are crazy"
"And you love that crazy girl"
"I don't"
"Really?" she pulls him by his shirt, and draws her face closer.
"Oh, see!"
"What?! I'm smelling your aftershave"
"Psh. Whatever you say."
They are lying, face to face on the back row of the car, Keun Suk adjusted the sit, as if they are lying.
"We could have sleep this way before, instead of you lying on my lap, you gave me a hard time"
Both of them laughs
"But I want to sleep on your lap" he draws her closer until his face touches his chest.
"Now sleep.
"Sweet dreams, I love you"
"I love you too, dream of me." he replied
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keep believing,
-notnecessarytoknowme
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